Rosebud's Rhapsody

Breath breathes into breath
as midnight air is captured, 
Flesh melts into flesh 
upon the wings of rapture, 

Black paradise erupts within 
Shadows move in rhythm 
Kiss envelops kiss 
The flower engulfs the stem, 

The rose bud opens her petals 
embracing the heated thunder 
the feeling most incredible 
Liquid love melts the bodies under, 

Drip to floor the elixir of the two 
Body stuck to body sips, 
Tongues taste the passion's dew 
Searing heat like flames through flesh it rips, 

Undulate in rhythm of the movement 
enchantment settles in the soul 
Nirvana casts a spell of melting beauty 
breath is quickened liquid falls below, 

Embraces tight so fierce they won't let go 
Wrapped around the flesh of frenzied gasps 
Ravishment intoxicates the midnight glow 
That space of time that only we will ever know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/26/2012 12:37:00 PM
Love this sensuous write very much!
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Date: 10/24/2012 5:53:00 PM
* I WISHED TO STOP BY BEFORE LEAVING THIS EVENING, SWEET BEAUTIFUL JUNIPER. AS WISHING YOUR BEAUTY THE MOST WONDERFUL IN DREAMS. MAY THEY BE SWEET. MY LOVE, RACHEL *
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Date: 10/25/2012 11:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, JL
Date: 10/24/2012 6:25:00 AM
I am stopping back to see if you have added any new poems to your list. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry with the world Juniper. You have taken a big step here and I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I will check back again another day. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2012 11:13:00 PM
Thank you! JL
Date: 10/23/2012 3:10:00 PM
A very well written poem Juniper, you are good. - Welcome to P-Soup - :) :) :) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/25/2012 11:12:00 PM
Thank you very much, JL
Date: 10/23/2012 2:17:00 PM
* 'Five 4 Five' * I Agree Entirely With Emph Unto Beautiful Connie's Com Below, Sweet Beautiful Astonishingly So, Beautiful Juniper. 'Rosebud's Rhaspsody." How Stimulating As Perfect, The Beauty Of The Thought. The Bar Your Beauty Sets To Merely Raise, In Brilliant Passion Upon Poetic's Stage. Erotic Exotic Scintilatingly Exquisite, Masterpiece. Now I Have To Gently Slide, Your Beauty's Other Faves Unto The Side And Polish Love's Place Where, Her Beauty Shall Reside. Sweet Kisses, Love, Rachel *
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Date: 10/25/2012 11:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Rachel
Date: 10/22/2012 11:54:00 PM
Juniper, a poem filled with the kind of passion that can only be known with experience. It is beautifully written with breath taking sighs heard with the magic of your words. Wow!
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Date: 10/23/2012 12:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie, Juniper
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