Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Poet Light Verse

Rose Pink Lips of Sparkling Dew

Rose Pink lips of sparkling dew.
Green eyes filled with love gazing at you
Ruby red, the blood surges through my heart
Blue, I am when we are apart.

Yellow that shimmers and shines as pure gold
White sheets where the lovers dance, or so I am told
Black is the chariot that brings me to you
While you gallop along with your armour of blue

Deep brown oh sweet nectar that energy revives
Drinking our fill together we strive
To dance the dance of true love with you
With rose pinks lips of sparkling dew.

© GG 11/08/2013
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Inspired by the last line in the Tanka, The face of Dawn by Harry J Horsman .

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Poet Destroyer A October 16, 2013 at 9:18 PM awesome win...Linda

Skat A October 15, 2013 at 10:09 PM Mandy.. :) Congratulations! --LOVE-- ~SKAT~

Skat A September 18, 2013 at 2:18 PM i like your poem ............ luv ~SKAT~

Sandra Adams September 14, 2013 at 10:29 AM congrats on your win with this lovely poem :)

Harry Horsman September 14, 2013 at 10:18 AM lovely Mandy a deserved winner...

Poet Destroyer A September 13, 2013 at 9:30 PM Mandy, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA

Richard Lamoureux September 13, 2013 at 9:11 AM Hi Mandy I wasn't sure which line you chose, the poem is beautiful though. Thanks for entering my contest.

Dr.Ram Mehta September 13, 2013 at 9:11 AM Congrats on the win in the contest, Mandy

Joseph May September 13, 2013 at 8:26 AM congrats on your win Mandy

Karen Croft August 12, 2013 at 7:18 AM Love the color variations!! Thanks for your comments

Harry Horsman August 11, 2013 at 4:29 PM this is truly wonderful Mandy, and thank you,, you took a single chord, and created, a symphony,

Andrea Dietrich August 11, 2013 at 3:46 PM I enjoyed this happy and lyrical poetry inspired by the awesome Harry Horsman!!! Nice seeing this today, Mandy.

Karen Anglesey August 11, 2013 at 2:59 PM Your poem is very vivid with great color scheme makes the images pop off tbe page...very nice

Sara Kendrick August 11, 2013 at 1:21 PM I really like the use of colors in writing this work..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon...Thanks for your visit to my work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 11, 2013 at 1:10 PM This is such a sweet write, Mandy. I enjoyed how you infused colors here, makes it more vivid. I will check out harry's poem that inspired this next time. Will sleep now, thanks again for your concern. I'm in a safe place.