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Rose Pink Lips of Sparkling Dew

Rose Pink lips of sparkling dew. Green eyes filled with love gazing at you Ruby red, the blood surges through my heart Blue, I am when we are apart. Yellow that shimmers and shines as pure gold White sheets where the lovers dance, or so I am told Black is the chariot that brings me to you While you gallop along with your armour of blue Deep brown oh sweet nectar that energy revives Drinking our fill together we strive To dance the dance of true love with you With rose pinks lips of sparkling dew. © GG 11/08/2013 Contest Entry Inspired by the last line in the Tanka, The face of Dawn by Harry J Horsman .

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/16/2013 9:18:00 PM

awesome win...Linda

Skat A

Date: 10/15/2013 10:09:00 PM

Mandy.. :) Congratulations! --LOVE-- ~SKAT~

Skat A

Date: 9/18/2013 2:18:00 PM

i like your poem ............ luv ~SKAT~

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/14/2013 10:29:00 AM

congrats on your win with this lovely poem :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/14/2013 10:18:00 AM

lovely Mandy a deserved winner...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/13/2013 9:30:00 PM

Mandy, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/13/2013 9:11:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Mandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/13/2013 9:11:00 AM

Hi Mandy I wasn't sure which line you chose, the poem is beautiful though. Thanks for entering my contest.

Joseph May

Date: 9/13/2013 8:26:00 AM

congrats on your win Mandy

Karen Croft

Date: 8/12/2013 7:18:00 AM

Love the color variations!! Thanks for your comments

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/11/2013 4:29:00 PM

this is truly wonderful Mandy, and thank you,, you took a single chord, and created, a symphony,

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2013 3:46:00 PM

I enjoyed this happy and lyrical poetry inspired by the awesome Harry Horsman!!! Nice seeing this today, Mandy.

Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/11/2013 2:59:00 PM

Your poem is very vivid with great color scheme makes the images pop off tbe page...very nice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/11/2013 1:21:00 PM

I really like the use of colors in writing this work..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon...Thanks for your visit to my work..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/11/2013 1:10:00 PM

This is such a sweet write, Mandy. I enjoyed how you infused colors here, makes it more vivid. I will check out harry's poem that inspired this next time. Will sleep now, thanks again for your concern. I'm in a safe place.