Rose Petals On My Table

early morning dream a butterfly on my eyes tiny fingers' touch an innocent face eagerly waits with closed eyes daily breakfast kiss rush hour traffic jam flower girl at the window dew drops on fresh rose ringing telephone nobody to attend it quivering roses afternoon tea time rose petals on my table another sun set © kashinath karmakar(21st August 2011) ============================= Placement:5th;(Sept.2011) Contest:Morning,noon or night senryu Sponsor:Francine Roberts
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Date: 12/12/2011 10:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Frank's "A History Of One Day" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/10/2011 1:14:00 PM
rose petal touch , with the dew drops just a touch....great work here...
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Date: 12/10/2011 10:38:00 AM
KASH congratulations in FRANK'S contest, have a wonderful day,..p.s.
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Date: 12/10/2011 9:10:00 AM
Oh , just perfectly lovely, .....a day that is the most perfect way to spend in harmony with the world. Congratulations, Kash!
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Date: 12/10/2011 5:40:00 AM
One of my favs~glad to see it resurfacing again. Happy Day. Gwendolen
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Date: 12/10/2011 5:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. x
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Date: 11/8/2011 10:42:00 PM
Kash, glad to review this one again by seeing it on the winners' list. I'd have rated THIS one higher too!!
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Date: 11/7/2011 10:23:00 AM
llVerly sweet poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/7/2011 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations to you for your win in Brian's "Any Which Way" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2011 5:34:00 AM
Congrats Kash on HM for this exquisite entry for Brian .. so luv it..enjoy honor my friend..luv.
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Date: 9/1/2011 1:03:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest, this is a truly beautiful sequence of senryus :-)
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:05:00 PM
Congrats Kash on a super win with this exciting poetry my friend.. Andrea's poem to compliment the one u wrote is so awesome ..hope u read it.. u had us all going with gender luv.. most excitement we have had since PD burst onto the scene..haha..
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Date: 8/30/2011 6:09:00 PM
Fine piece of work,Kashi.Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/30/2011 4:54:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this expressive work..Sara
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Date: 8/30/2011 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved winning piece Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2011 3:11:00 AM
hey kash congrats on a great win, loved this one, David
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:57:00 PM
way to go, Kash, you are right above me on the list! GREAT GOING.
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:28:00 PM
congrats on your 5th place win in the contest Kashinath, lovely poem
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Date: 8/28/2011 3:16:00 AM
A pleasant relaxing poem, leaves me with a good feeling. good luck. regards Margaret
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Date: 8/24/2011 8:01:00 AM
A beautiful series Kash, wishing you all the best for the contest :) Wilma
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Date: 8/23/2011 3:46:00 PM
oh my....these are so wonderful...each stands alone, but together...just magic!!
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Date: 8/22/2011 11:41:00 PM
A true delight this senryu is. what wonderful observation. Happiness Always :) thanks for your kind words
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Date: 8/22/2011 9:41:00 PM
very good poem like it and thank you for your kind comments on the contest. But alas all the praise and glory go to the Holy Spirit God gave me His time and for that I'm thankful, God bless you and your writings. Robert
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Date: 8/22/2011 5:13:00 PM
Beautiful way you used the roses Kashinath. A delight to read if I may say so :)
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Date: 8/22/2011 11:47:00 AM
what a glorious morning, kashi.. i'd gladly have this... much enjoyed with winning streaks.:) huggs, nette
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