Kash Poet Poet Senryu

Rose Petals On My Table

early morning dream
a butterfly on my eyes
tiny fingers' touch

an innocent face
eagerly waits with closed eyes
daily breakfast kiss

rush hour traffic jam
flower girl at the window
dew drops on fresh rose

ringing telephone
nobody to attend it
quivering roses

afternoon tea time
rose petals on my table
another sun set





© kashinath karmakar(21st August 2011)
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Placement:5th;(Sept.2011)

Contest:Morning,noon or night senryu

Sponsor:Francine Roberts

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Carol Sunshine Brown December 12, 2011 at 10:24 AM Congratulations on your placement in Frank's "A History Of One Day" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Don Johnson December 10, 2011 at 1:14 PM rose petal touch , with the dew drops just a touch....great work here...

Poet Destroyer A December 10, 2011 at 10:38 AM KASH congratulations in FRANK'S contest, have a wonderful day,..p.s.

Carrie Richards December 10, 2011 at 9:10 AM Oh , just perfectly lovely, .....a day that is the most perfect way to spend in harmony with the world. Congratulations, Kash!

Gwendolen Song December 10, 2011 at 5:40 AM One of my favs~glad to see it resurfacing again. Happy Day. Gwendolen

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 10, 2011 at 5:32 AM Congratulations on your win. x

Andrea Dietrich November 8, 2011 at 10:42 PM Kash, glad to review this one again by seeing it on the winners' list. I'd have rated THIS one higher too!!

Joyce Johnson November 7, 2011 at 10:23 AM llVerly sweet poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown November 7, 2011 at 6:56 AM Congratulations to you for your win in Brian's "Any Which Way" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 7, 2011 at 5:34 AM Congrats Kash on HM for this exquisite entry for Brian .. so luv it..enjoy honor my friend..luv.

Charlotte Puddifoot September 1, 2011 at 1:03 PM congrats on your win in the contest, this is a truly beautiful sequence of senryus :-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 30, 2011 at 10:05 PM Congrats Kash on a super win with this exciting poetry my friend.. Andrea's poem to compliment the one u wrote is so awesome ..hope u read it.. u had us all going with gender luv.. most excitement we have had since PD burst onto the scene..haha..

Olusegun Arowolo August 30, 2011 at 6:09 PM Fine piece of work,Kashi.Congratulations on your win.

Sara Kendrick August 30, 2011 at 4:54 PM Congrats on your win with this expressive work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2011 at 7:29 AM Congratulations on your well deserved winning piece Kashinath. Love, Carol

David Williams August 30, 2011 at 3:11 AM hey kash congrats on a great win, loved this one, David

Andrea Dietrich August 29, 2011 at 11:57 PM way to go, Kash, you are right above me on the list! GREAT GOING.

Francine Roberts August 29, 2011 at 11:28 PM congrats on your 5th place win in the contest Kashinath, lovely poem

Margaret Foster August 28, 2011 at 3:16 AM A pleasant relaxing poem, leaves me with a good feeling. good luck. regards Margaret

Wilma Neels August 24, 2011 at 8:01 AM A beautiful series Kash, wishing you all the best for the contest :) Wilma

Carrie Richards August 23, 2011 at 3:46 PM oh my....these are so wonderful...each stands alone, but together...just magic!!

Afroze Ali August 22, 2011 at 11:41 PM A true delight this senryu is. what wonderful observation. Happiness Always :) thanks for your kind words

Robert Ball August 22, 2011 at 9:41 PM very good poem like it and thank you for your kind comments on the contest. But alas all the praise and glory go to the Holy Spirit God gave me His time and for that I'm thankful, God bless you and your writings. Robert

James Fraser August 22, 2011 at 5:13 PM Beautiful way you used the roses Kashinath. A delight to read if I may say so :)

Nette Onclaud August 22, 2011 at 11:47 AM what a glorious morning, kashi.. i'd gladly have this... much enjoyed with winning streaks.:) huggs, nette

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