Caryl Muzzey Poet Dodoitsu

Rose Petals

One by one rose petals fall
blanketing silken pink sheets 
perfumed fragrance tantalize....
rosebush garden bare

Copyright © 2010  By Caryl S. Muzzey

Fourth Place Winner ~ "Spicy” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Michael J. Falotico
Jan. 29, 2011

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Sharon Ruebel January 24, 2011 at 1:32 PM Hello Caryl, Congratulations on your win, this is beautiful... As Always, Shar

Poet Destroyer A January 23, 2011 at 4:05 PM Carly~A late Congratulation~ on your win in Michael's hot contest,..p.d.

Eiken Laan January 23, 2011 at 2:04 PM Wonderful poem Caryl:))

Carol Sunshine Brown January 23, 2011 at 8:25 AM Congratulations Caryl, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Michael. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick January 22, 2011 at 3:05 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich January 22, 2011 at 1:28 PM congraulations, Caryl, in my opinion one of the very best in the contest. A 7 if I didn't rank it before!

Nette Onclaud January 22, 2011 at 9:39 AM how sweet this is! CONGRATS to you, caryl.. hurrah! :) huggs, nette

Wilma Neels January 22, 2011 at 9:23 AM Caryl, congratulations on your great win in the contest, love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 22, 2011 at 6:12 AM Congrats Caryl on your super win in the Spicy for ladies only contest with this wonderful write and win luv..

Michael J. Falotico January 22, 2011 at 6:06 AM Congrats to you and thank you for entering my contest with this gem...love Michael

Kory Calhoun January 22, 2011 at 6:02 AM Hi Caryl - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "SPICY" contest. Best wishes, KC

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2011 at 7:31 PM coming back here to see this one. It better rank HIGH!!!

Andrea Dietrich January 13, 2011 at 9:33 PM ooh la la. I really LIKE THIS ONE!!

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet January 13, 2011 at 1:30 PM Really is beautiful good luck in the contest.Thanks for your congrats on my win.~Teresa~

Poet Destroyer A January 4, 2011 at 10:21 AM lovely write, enjoyed,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown January 3, 2011 at 3:27 AM What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry Caryl. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick January 2, 2011 at 6:08 PM Very romantic, Caryl! Perfect for the contest! Wishing you a very happy New Year with blessings, peace and joy! And thank you for the kind comments! Always, Audrey

Robert Pettit January 2, 2011 at 4:43 PM Good writing, but check your third line because there are eight syllables there.

Nette Onclaud January 2, 2011 at 4:22 AM erotica shines, caryl!! you tantalized me with this sultry piece.. thanks for the gracious visit and best winnicng lusk in the contest... warmest, nette

Andrea Dietrich January 1, 2011 at 11:50 PM that last line really adds to the whole thing, a magnificent implication! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta January 1, 2011 at 5:41 PM It's a spicy with controlled emotions, Caryl. Good luck in the contest,

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 1, 2011 at 4:06 PM thankxxx for supporting Michael's contest Caryl as we hope the poets would enjoy this theme and form ... appreciate as we co sponsor this one.. good luck my friend.. lovely piece...