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Rose Petals

One by one rose petals fall blanketing silken pink sheets perfumed fragrance tantalize.... rosebush garden bare Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey Fourth Place Winner ~ "Spicy” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Michael J. Falotico Jan. 29, 2011

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Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/24/2011 1:32:00 PM

Hello Caryl, Congratulations on your win, this is beautiful... As Always, Shar

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/23/2011 4:05:00 PM

Carly~A late Congratulation~ on your win in Michael's hot contest,..p.d.

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/23/2011 2:04:00 PM

Wonderful poem Caryl:))

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/23/2011 8:25:00 AM

Congratulations Caryl, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Michael. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2011 3:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2011 1:28:00 PM

congraulations, Caryl, in my opinion one of the very best in the contest. A 7 if I didn't rank it before!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/22/2011 9:39:00 AM

how sweet this is! CONGRATS to you, caryl.. hurrah! :) huggs, nette

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/22/2011 9:23:00 AM

Caryl, congratulations on your great win in the contest, love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/22/2011 6:12:00 AM

Congrats Caryl on your super win in the Spicy for ladies only contest with this wonderful write and win luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/22/2011 6:06:00 AM

Congrats to you and thank you for entering my contest with this gem...love Michael

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/22/2011 6:02:00 AM

Hi Caryl - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "SPICY" contest. Best wishes, KC

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2011 7:31:00 PM

coming back here to see this one. It better rank HIGH!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2011 9:33:00 PM

ooh la la. I really LIKE THIS ONE!!

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 1/13/2011 1:30:00 PM

Really is beautiful good luck in the contest.Thanks for your congrats on my win.~Teresa~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/4/2011 10:21:00 AM

lovely write, enjoyed,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/3/2011 3:27:00 AM

What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry Caryl. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/2/2011 6:08:00 PM

Very romantic, Caryl! Perfect for the contest! Wishing you a very happy New Year with blessings, peace and joy! And thank you for the kind comments! Always, Audrey

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/2/2011 4:43:00 PM

Good writing, but check your third line because there are eight syllables there.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/2/2011 4:22:00 AM

erotica shines, caryl!! you tantalized me with this sultry piece.. thanks for the gracious visit and best winnicng lusk in the contest... warmest, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2011 11:50:00 PM

that last line really adds to the whole thing, a magnificent implication! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/1/2011 5:41:00 PM

It's a spicy with controlled emotions, Caryl. Good luck in the contest,

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/1/2011 4:06:00 PM

thankxxx for supporting Michael's contest Caryl as we hope the poets would enjoy this theme and form ... appreciate as we co sponsor this one.. good luck my friend.. lovely piece...