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"rose Kisses"

A pedal so silk
falls from a rose like a kiss 
from your sweet soft lips.


for LINDA'S WEEKEND CONTEST.

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Poet Destroyer A

August 28, 2010 at 4:02 PM

Stoppppping! By to read one more before I move on to my posted poem. If you do have the chance I would like a dear comment or opinion. This Haiku really soften a lot of womenly thoughts . Loved and enjoed the third time,..love LeeAnn

James Fraser

August 23, 2010 at 1:26 PM

You can't beat Roses in poems Michael. Every poem I see with them in it, I read and comment. Just delightful >> James

Juan Paolo Galua

August 13, 2010 at 4:28 AM

incredibly romantic michael...love it..^_^ v

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 12, 2010 at 9:58 AM

Congratulations Michael on your win in Linda-Marie's contest" Flowers,Trees & Shrubs I Luv Haiku". Love, Carol

John Freeman

August 9, 2010 at 5:22 PM

Congratulations, Michael. on your third place, Agape, Moses

Miranda Gilly

August 9, 2010 at 7:37 AM

thankyou, i dont consist having fabulous poetry but all of i is written from my heart so yeh. whoeverthis girl is she is quit lucky to have such an amzing writer like you(: yur amazing!

Francine Roberts

August 8, 2010 at 10:51 AM

congrats on your win with this beautiful entry

Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2010 at 10:05 PM

VEry sweet one. congratulation, Michael. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 7, 2010 at 9:57 PM

Congrats on the 3rd place win, Michael

Skat A

August 7, 2010 at 1:47 PM

Michale:) a beautiful way to describe a meaningful kiss. Soft like the pedal of a rose*luv~SKAT

Jessica Arteaga

August 7, 2010 at 8:32 AM

o so soft the feeling your poems gives, very good , congrats

Carolyn Devonshire

August 7, 2010 at 7:08 AM

So gentle and romantic, Michael. I keep hoping to meet someone who sees life like this. Best wishes in the contest with your beautiful haiku. Love, Carolyn