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rose is beauty

rose is beauty like u
once crushed,
she would dissolve 
in the lap of soil,
with her tattered dreams
like every indian women

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/11/2015 2:22:00 PM
I can read this over and over. In her lap of soil. A very good metaphor. Sending soup mail
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Date: 5/26/2015 6:44:00 PM
Beautiful but sad Sneha:-( you must stay strong and bloom like a beautiful rose :-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/25/2015 2:50:00 AM
Indian women are beautiful. I hear you because you are an Indian woman right? Yes I know of course you are.
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Date: 5/18/2015 12:31:00 AM
Roses are very beautiful and so are (all) women. I believe that black women are beautiful because yes you guessed it I am a beautiful black woman.
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Date: 5/17/2015 11:00:00 PM
Thanks for enlighting me on a revelent issue. Welcome to Poetry Soup . I'm fairly new as well.When you get a chance stop by and let me know what you think.- Alexis
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Date: 5/17/2015 9:35:00 AM
Hi Sneha, Back here again. You need more poetry. Came back to see if you had a new verse or so. Forever *SKAT*
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Date: 5/15/2015 2:58:00 AM
Wow, you describe beauty in such a tantalizing manner. Wonderfully composed. 7+!
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Date: 5/12/2015 3:48:00 AM
Thanks for the SoupMail Sneha. So delighted to have you as friend.About this write it's beautiful but not every Indian woman is oppressed. You should know coming from a state like Kerala with it's matriarchal system. Read Kamala Das great poet and feminist from Kerala.Also we have had women leading this country and shining in their chosen fields....your poem is thought provoking. Keep writing.
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Date: 5/11/2015 5:25:00 PM
Wow, that's so sad.. That needs to change!
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Date: 5/10/2015 3:38:00 PM
It was true Sneha, but these days women in India has come forth in many different fields and they are strong enough, for its not only to their family, but the society and the country itself that they have proved their worth... even when crushed they try to stand up, their voice ever stronger... loved your little poem, for it speaks for those subalterns who still suffer... and also of the worth of physical beauty, for once it is destroyed its gone forever
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Date: 5/10/2015 11:14:00 AM
a beautiful way to display the rose. SKAT
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Date: 5/10/2015 7:35:00 AM
All women are beautiful in their own way. I feel sorry for those women who have to succumb to strict, restraining traditions, and others who fall prey to abuse, both mental and physical. Take care. // paul
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