Rose and Mauve

Rose and Mauve

Rose and Mauve arise -

 Rooster crows tell moonlight leave -

   Windmill sings dawn praise.

4/25/20
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Roper Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 4:23 PM
Sam, congratulations on your win in Joseph contest. Hugs Eve
Kauffman Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 4:48 PM
Thank you Eve. This was such a fun contest. The "gif" was really inspiring. Hope you are doing well! Many prayers and hugs!
Carber Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 12:34 PM
Nice, Sam--have you tried haiku? you seem a natural....
Kauffman Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 4:46 PM
Hi LJ - thank you for your compliment and your encouragement! Have been experimenting with haiku, sedryu and sedoka. Enjoying the challenge of putting full thoughts and images into limited words with a punchline ending! So fun. Hope you are doing well! Many blessings to you! Glad to see so many of your poems on the winners lists!
La France Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 10:30 AM
Sam, nice and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest _Constance
Pandit Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 6:43 AM
Sights and sounds of dawn beautifully captured in splendid imagery--congrats Sam on your well deserved win.
Gaul Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 5:03 AM
Excellent choice of imaginative wording especially with the final line. Congrats my friend.
Adams Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 8:33 PM
back to say congratulations my friend... hugs :)
Kauffman Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 11:07 PM
Thank you dear friend! hugs and prayers.
Ashley Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 8:25 PM
Simply splendid, Sam. Vibrant imagery with a great last line.. I love the windmill singing praise :) Congratulations for a wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Kauffman Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 6:10 PM
Thank you so much Susan for your congratulations and encouraging message! Haiku is an amazing opportunity to paint with vivid imagery then end with a punchline - so fun to create. All the best to you!
Allison Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 4:50 PM
super imagery Sam, many congrats :-) hugs Jan xx
Watt Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 7:17 AM
Don't you love how bossy that old rooster can be? I love your inclusion of the windmill in this little gem. Congrats on your placement, Sam.
Kauffman Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 6:15 PM
I do love that bossy rooster - his morning song - sometimes! The picture really didn't seem complete without the windmill and its soothing rhythm! Thank you dear friend! I have grown to enjoy writing haiki, senryu and sedoka - great exercises for the verbose and loquacious like me.
Faulkner Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 9:29 PM
A rose and mauve morning, lovely imagery for the contest-
Kauffman Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 7:34 PM
Thank you my friend. The "gif" was such an inspiration. Have seen mornings like this in the country - beyond words but we, as poets, still try. Isn't it wonderful?!
Cunningham Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 1:58 AM
Love your interpretation of the picture Sam, good luck, over fork over. Tom
Kauffman Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 7:30 PM
Hi Tom! Thank you. So many ways to go with this wonderful gif. Thank you for your best wishes. All the best to you. Blessings. Over Fork Over!
Adams Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 10:41 PM
vivid imagery...a beautiful scene painted in so few words... :) hugs
Kauffman Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 7:28 PM
Thank you dear friend. Morning is so beautiful in so many ways. Was a wonderful challenge to encapsulate that beauty in a haiku. Sending you blessings and hugs!
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 8:23 PM
just wonderful
Kauffman Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 8:42 PM
Thank you. The picture provided was a wonderful jumping off point. I'm finding I really enjoy haiku, sedoka and senryu. They are a refreshing change and challenge! Be well. Have a good weekend. Blessings and hugs.
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