Rose
As the sun rose like a bud
The bud rose like the sun
The rose bud opened up
To criticism
And blushed
As the sun’s rays washed
Its face in the morning air
And then, from nowhere,
A bee came to kiss
in passionate French way
the nectar deep
within the blushed display
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