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Pyramid Contest, Joseph Amy, 8/15/2025

ROSE

ROSE
blushing
twirling stem

newly together
with future husband, I
personify gift: “water”

“Pluckiness of youth - dying rose”

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2025

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Andrea Dietrich

August 22, 2025 at 8:50 AM

A profound one here. Congrats for the win, kim

August 22, 2025 at 10:27 AM

Thank you, Andrea!

Paula Goldsmith

August 21, 2025 at 11:19 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Rose" write again. I love pick roses. Have a blessed day with your win................

August 22, 2025 at 10:27 AM

A lovely color choice! Hugs!

August 20, 2025 at 4:55 PM

Very nicely penned Kim, Congrats on your win

August 22, 2025 at 10:28 AM

Thank you, Joe!

August 15, 2025 at 10:11 PM

Nice pyramid poem, Kim. Good shaping! Good luck in the contest. Bill

August 16, 2025 at 10:54 AM

Thank you, Bill!

sara Etgen-Baker

August 15, 2025 at 4:53 PM

nicely penned for the contest! Best wishes with this entry...have a splendid evening, Sara

August 15, 2025 at 6:05 PM

Have a fab weekend! Thank you!

August 15, 2025 at 2:48 PM

You should enter this in the contest. Roses are so many different colors, unexpected genius " blushing twirling stem"

August 15, 2025 at 3:27 PM

Thank you, Paige! I did enter the contest :)

Paula Goldsmith

August 15, 2025 at 11:12 AM

Your "Rose" is a lovely write. I almost did rose but I did Beach. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............

August 15, 2025 at 3:28 PM

Have a rosy or beachy day or both!

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