ROSE

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Pyramid Contest, Joseph Amy, 8/15/2025

ROSE
blushing
twirling stem

newly together
with future husband, I
personify gift: “water”

“Pluckiness of youth - dying rose”

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Bill Baker

Date: 8/15/2025 10:11:00 PM

Nice pyramid poem, Kim. Good shaping! Good luck in the contest. Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2025 10:54:00 AM

Thank you, Bill!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/15/2025 4:53:00 PM

nicely penned for the contest! Best wishes with this entry...have a splendid evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2025 6:05:00 PM

Have a fab weekend! Thank you!

Paige Hind

Date: 8/15/2025 2:48:00 PM

You should enter this in the contest. Roses are so many different colors, unexpected genius " blushing twirling stem"

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2025 3:27:00 PM

Thank you, Paige! I did enter the contest :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/15/2025 11:12:00 AM

Your "Rose" is a lovely write. I almost did rose but I did Beach. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2025 3:28:00 PM

Have a rosy or beachy day or both!