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October 10, 2023

How are you feeling - Poetry Contest (maximum 17 words)

Sponsor: Silent One

FIRST PLACE

Dejected like a wilted drooping Rose losing fragrance and beauty, am I still going to accept defeat!

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/17/2023 1:43:00 AM

- A touching feeling, Mala :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2023 10:57:00 AM

I like your poetic monoku. Congrats

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/16/2023 10:59:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Probably we feel the same way. Hugs ~

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2023 8:08:00 AM

Must be fragile feeling like a rose... Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/15/2023 8:51:00 AM

Yes, Dear Poet-friend. I am honoured with placement in your contest.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/10/2023 11:32:00 AM

Hello Mala, you are strong and can get through this. Love& Friendship Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/10/2023 3:21:00 PM

Hello Mala, any way I can help. You are welcome. Love &Friendship/ Darlene/

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/10/2023 12:59:00 PM

Dearest Darlene, your message inspires me - gives me so much energy! Thank you.