Rose-Quartz Haze

When jade Specks of desire carved a raven calamitous shape of coal-crescent, losing the last soil once
My lilac heart of rouge runes, shimmered in galaxy, lathered with embers of laced life for soul of thou
I float in rose quartz haze befogged upon starlit symphony's hymnal moondust, strolling in perfumed 'You'.

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Date: 1/16/2024 2:45:00 AM
BTW, a miniature thunderstorm.
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Date: 1/16/2024 2:44:00 AM
To echo what's been said, you pick images that ring so true. Rose quartz does have an interesting cloudiness, and I never thought of it in this light. If you press on quartz with another object and try to scratch it in the dark, you can see it spark internally due to piezo electricity? Crystals are so interesting and you select so many.
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Date: 8/25/2023 1:56:00 PM
Fabulous, original poetry,Hiya. Outstanding imagery… . Thank you for your work. Panagiota
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Date: 8/23/2023 3:44:00 PM
Hiya, I must say your poetry is exquisitely crafted. It soars far above the average, showcasing a remarkable level of skill and artistry. Each piece is a breathtaking work of beauty. The final one truly captivated me, leaving me in awe of its sheer brilliance. It is a masterpiece that transports the reader to a world of wonder and enchantment. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration.
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Date: 8/23/2023 1:15:00 PM
WOW!!! What a creative/lovely write. Love It... Have a blessed day writing away............
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Date: 8/23/2023 11:41:00 AM
Your words are amazing Hiya, your blessed, and so am I for reading this :)
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Date: 8/22/2023 9:08:00 PM
Such lovely words shared here Hiva...
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Date: 8/22/2023 10:00:00 AM
A very beautiful love painted in these fine verses my friend. "Yours are as three beats of a loving heart. Fragrance of love and jasmine thus wedded. And kissing of stars and moon for or start. Sweet cool summer night we will be bedded." Afav . God bless.
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Date: 8/22/2023 9:24:00 AM
Well penned ninetts. I love them all.
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Date: 8/22/2023 7:47:00 AM
Hiya, there is a place in Australia, where every path is lined with large rose quartz crystals. It is a wondrous place as is your beautiful poetry. Your magic phrases in your Ninettes reminded me of the Chrystal Castle as I strolled through it with a loved one. Your poetry is breathtaking. Best wishes from SV.
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Date: 8/22/2023 7:15:00 AM
Gorgeous poetry. Do you really have a lilac heart? I'll bet you do. Strolling amidst the cosmos with a loved one - heavenly
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Date: 8/22/2023 5:21:00 AM
Very romantic one you have penned in this creative decorated stones of the earth poem. Your vision laid before us tells us that you really love this person. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 8/22/2023 2:31:00 AM
- All are beautifully written, Hiva ... my favorite is the last one ... it's wonderful :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs
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