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Rose-Quartz Haze

When jade Specks of desire carved a raven calamitous shape of coal-crescent, losing the last soil once My lilac heart of rouge runes, shimmered in galaxy, lathered with embers of laced life for soul of thou I float in rose quartz haze befogged upon starlit symphony's hymnal moondust, strolling in perfumed 'You'.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/16/2024 2:45:00 AM

BTW, a miniature thunderstorm.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/16/2024 2:44:00 AM

To echo what's been said, you pick images that ring so true. Rose quartz does have an interesting cloudiness, and I never thought of it in this light. If you press on quartz with another object and try to scratch it in the dark, you can see it spark internally due to piezo electricity? Crystals are so interesting and you select so many.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/3/2023 2:08:00 PM

I am awed by your talent. You have a unique style that serves you and your theme. I found your title and last stanza engaging. Just beautiful

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/25/2023 1:56:00 PM

Fabulous, original poetry,Hiya. Outstanding imagery… . Thank you for your work. Panagiota

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/23/2023 3:44:00 PM

Hiya, I must say your poetry is exquisitely crafted. It soars far above the average, showcasing a remarkable level of skill and artistry. Each piece is a breathtaking work of beauty. The final one truly captivated me, leaving me in awe of its sheer brilliance. It is a masterpiece that transports the reader to a world of wonder and enchantment. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/23/2023 1:15:00 PM

WOW!!! What a creative/lovely write. Love It... Have a blessed day writing away............

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/23/2023 11:41:00 AM

Your words are amazing Hiya, your blessed, and so am I for reading this :)

Michael Tor

Date: 8/22/2023 9:08:00 PM

Such lovely words shared here Hiva...

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/22/2023 10:00:00 AM

A very beautiful love painted in these fine verses my friend. "Yours are as three beats of a loving heart. Fragrance of love and jasmine thus wedded. And kissing of stars and moon for or start. Sweet cool summer night we will be bedded." Afav . God bless.

Jay Narain

Date: 8/22/2023 9:24:00 AM

Well penned ninetts. I love them all.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/22/2023 7:47:00 AM

Hiya, there is a place in Australia, where every path is lined with large rose quartz crystals. It is a wondrous place as is your beautiful poetry. Your magic phrases in your Ninettes reminded me of the Chrystal Castle as I strolled through it with a loved one. Your poetry is breathtaking. Best wishes from SV.

Tom Woody

Date: 8/22/2023 7:15:00 AM

Gorgeous poetry. Do you really have a lilac heart? I'll bet you do. Strolling amidst the cosmos with a loved one - heavenly

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/22/2023 5:21:00 AM

Very romantic one you have penned in this creative decorated stones of the earth poem. Your vision laid before us tells us that you really love this person. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/22/2023 2:31:00 AM

- All are beautifully written, Hiva ... my favorite is the last one ... it's wonderful :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs