Rosanna

Rosanna, bible in her hand Took me through the dark days Showed me another way I hold her hand Rosanna, praise the lord for me Set me free My thoughts were dark from the start I wanted your soul Rosanna, your words like you are true The good book was made for you The passion in your eyes The love, there’s no disguise Rosanna, I tried, glad I failed You can’t beat God I know that Knew from the start Rosanna, bible in her hand God in her heart Making a stand I watch her, rifle in hand God bless Rosanna.

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/19/2024 12:27:00 AM

A poem of intrigue - your ending to a fine poem so unexpected and clever. Blessings to you my fellow poet, Jennifer.

Paul Bell
Date: 11/19/2024 9:23:00 AM

Never mess with a girl with a rifle in her hands.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2024 8:49:00 AM

Very intriguing there at the end. Not sure what to make of that. I enjoyed finding your poem today. Your name is so familiar to me but I can't remember commenting to you very recently.

Paul Bell
Date: 11/17/2024 5:39:00 AM

Been awhile, Andrea, hope life is treating you well.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/10/2024 10:50:00 AM

what a creative write this is, paul,with an ending I didn't foresee...may you continue to assault my senses , in a fine way, hah...got more?

Paul Bell
Date: 11/11/2024 2:39:00 AM

Keeping you on your toes, Nette.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/10/2024 8:13:00 AM

Your "Rosanna" sure is a write/story. I enjoyed reading it.... Have a blessed day writing away..................

Paul Bell
Date: 11/11/2024 2:38:00 AM

Thanks, Paula.