Roots - Bottoms Up

A tree's roots are under the ground
   where, with little fanfare or sound
They nourish the tree that we get to see
   its trunk and its limbs, its twigs and its leaves
 
Our focus on powerful branches
   or brilliant autumnal scenes--
We know that without sturdy roots deep down
   there'd be nary a tree for miles around...

Yet my family tree has its deepest roots on top
   Without those brave primogenitors
      ~ all growth would have stopped

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Date: 2/6/2020 12:09:00 AM
Family tree is a tree upside down.. Roots in heaven and leaves in hell.. lol.. Great poem..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/6/2020 2:41:00 PM
Or perhaps --- eats shoots and leaves... :) gw
Date: 2/5/2020 5:12:00 PM
What amazes me is how little people know of their ancestors these days. I meet children who have never met their grandparents, and they live in the same town. I think that might stop growth.
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Date: 2/6/2020 2:40:00 PM
Come on! Almost unbelievable, although with divorce so prevalent today, maybe that's the reason for what is otherwise inexplicable... Thanks, Caren. :) gw
Date: 2/5/2020 2:10:00 PM
How true that we owe gratitude to our ancestors for the strong "roots" they provided. We never knew my father's father, so we have trouble tracing our roots. This topic has been on my mind a lot lately and you expressed your feelings beautifully, Gershon. Hugs, Carolyn
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/5/2020 3:01:00 PM
Thank you so much for the love on this one, Carolyn Greatly appreciated. Warm wishes, Gershon
Date: 2/5/2020 12:13:00 PM
So true, those last lines. Well penned.
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Date: 2/4/2020 10:30:00 PM
Gershon, your clever poem has humor, wit, and a large amount of truth! The rhyming is very enjoyable, too. Best wishes, Evelyn :)
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Date: 2/4/2020 8:45:00 PM
Good one Gershon. My family tree has some twisted roots but I guess some good ones were at the top ...hugs
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/4/2020 9:14:00 PM
There you go. We all have a few twisted roots here and there, I imagine. Thanks, Gershon
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