Rooting 8-5

Abandoned Tree My heart aches, I miss your loving touch I'm am a abandoned tree with many roots Because the pain in my soul runs deep I was once alive, such a lovely sight But now my roots are wrapped in hurt 1-4-16 Contest: Rooting 8-5 Sponsor: Nette Oncloud

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2017 6:19:00 PM

I love the metaphor you created with this for the roots challenge. WEll done!

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/8/2017 6:24:00 PM

Hi Andrea, It's nice to see you. Thank you so much. The contest filled up fast and I forgot to enter.I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/5/2017 7:45:00 AM

Very sad and mournful poem, Alexis. That is how love have us going through, the pain and the joy. Hope it place well in the contest. A solid poem w/a dash of baby, baby, please ... baby, please, baby, baby in it. Nice write. Love and hugs to you.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/4/2017 9:43:00 AM

Great take on the theme Alexis there are so many possibilities with this contest I have seen some brilliant creative ideas:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 1/4/2017 9:06:00 AM

Sadly beautiful Alexis. You did an amazing job with this for the contest. I wish you much luck my friend.

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/4/2017 9:09:00 AM

Hi Chris, Thank you so much. I don't know if it's what Nette is looking for, but just knowing you liked it please me. I appreciate your continued support. :-) Alexis