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Rooster Fred

Welcome to our barnyard, you can call me Fred.
My job is to get everyone out of bed.
Cheerful by nature, I’m proud to “cock-a-doodle-do.”
A beautiful crow to hear - they act like I shout, “Boo!”
 
A morning person would think this is the best job ever.
At dawn, I’m sad to say, few appreciate me being clever.
Yes, I know the names they call me... I try to shrug it off.
Cock-of-the-walk really gripes me, who are they to scoff?
 
Some are jealous of my red cone, it is so beautiful.
Lifting my neck to properly crow is being dutiful.
Believe me, I’ve tried and tried not to strut my stuff.
To be a rooster and not be cocky is really quite tough.
 
Throughout the day I continue to “cock-a-doodle-do.”
Yes, it does sound like revenge, but wouldn’t you?
Of course if danger arises everyone needs to hear me.
I like them calling me brave and crowding to be near me.

Without me this barnyard would never be on time.
Deep down they all know it, I just wish they would be kind.


Written 2-19-2016

Form: Rhyme Personification
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ellison Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 4:15 PM
Absolutely delightful Susan!!! A definite fav for me!!! Love, Happy Jack XOX
Gentry Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 11:30 PM
LOL. That seems like so long ago. Glad you like it. Thanks for fav too.
Delaney Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 4:01 PM
You did an amazing job conveying the story for this theme. It is so true of roosters I have known. Lol A Fav and a 7. Smiles, SuZ
Gentry Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 4:36 AM
Thank you, Suzanne! Wow... I appreciate the Fav and 7! :)
Turner Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 9:02 PM
How clever you are. Great poem. I thought I'd scope out the competition. This looks good. Good luck. Peace to you my sweet friend:)
Gentry Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 2:02 AM
:) why thank you! I'll be looking for yours and good luck to you too. Take care my friend :)
May Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 2:53 PM
A wonderful story Susan...very nicely penned...enjoyed
Gentry Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 9:27 AM
Thank you Joseph! Glad you enjoyed!
Mcclain Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 9:55 AM
A delight to read and wonderfully creative-- real kid's book material! Well done!
Gentry Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 8:53 AM
Thank you Brian! I thought the same when I was writing it. Going to try it out on my grandson. :)
Williams Gault Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 7:45 AM
This was so clever and well thought out. You had me at that line, "but you'd think I shouted, "Boo!", made me laugh out loud. An A1 write!
Gentry Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 1:43 AM
Thank you so much Dineen! I'm glad you enjoyed. Your comment gave me a big smile. :) Thanks.
Hicks Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 3:19 PM
Roosters are really the "cock-of-the-walk" and so full of themselves (yet unappreciated). This piece was rip-roaring and your humor really gets to me ... very funny, Susan!
Gentry Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 1:25 AM
:) Why Thank you Tim! Glad you enjoyed it.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 9:47 AM
So much fun!
Gentry Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 1:22 AM
Thank you Rick!
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 5:29 AM
- Fred has an important job :) - A lovely poem, Susan - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentry Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 12:21 AM
:) Thanks so much! Hugs...
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