Rooster Fred

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Welcome to our barnyard, you can call me Fred.
My job is to get everyone out of bed.
Cheerful by nature, I’m proud to “cock-a-doodle-do.”
A beautiful crow to hear - they act like I shout, “Boo!”
 
A morning person would think this is the best job ever.
At dawn, I’m sad to say, few appreciate me being clever.
Yes, I know the names they call me... I try to shrug it off.
Cock-of-the-walk really gripes me, who are they to scoff?
 
Some are jealous of my red cone, it is so beautiful.
Lifting my neck to properly crow is being dutiful.
Believe me, I’ve tried and tried not to strut my stuff.
To be a rooster and not be cocky is really quite tough.
 
Throughout the day I continue to “cock-a-doodle-do.”
Yes, it does sound like revenge, but wouldn’t you?
Of course if danger arises everyone needs to hear me.
I like them calling me brave and crowding to be near me.

Without me this barnyard would never be on time.
Deep down they all know it, I just wish they would be kind.


Written 2-19-2016

Form: Rhyme Personification

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/4/2018 4:15:00 PM
Absolutely delightful Susan!!! A definite fav for me!!! Love, Happy Jack XOX
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/4/2018 11:30:00 PM
LOL. That seems like so long ago. Glad you like it. Thanks for fav too.
Date: 3/11/2016 4:01:00 PM
You did an amazing job conveying the story for this theme. It is so true of roosters I have known. Lol A Fav and a 7. Smiles, SuZ
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Date: 3/22/2016 4:36:00 AM
Thank you, Suzanne! Wow... I appreciate the Fav and 7! :)
Date: 3/2/2016 9:02:00 PM
How clever you are. Great poem. I thought I'd scope out the competition. This looks good. Good luck. Peace to you my sweet friend:)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/4/2016 2:02:00 AM
:) why thank you! I'll be looking for yours and good luck to you too. Take care my friend :)
Date: 2/24/2016 2:53:00 PM
A wonderful story Susan...very nicely penned...enjoyed
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/25/2016 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Joseph! Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 2/24/2016 9:55:00 AM
A delight to read and wonderfully creative-- real kid's book material! Well done!
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Date: 2/25/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Brian! I thought the same when I was writing it. Going to try it out on my grandson. :)
Date: 2/23/2016 7:45:00 AM
This was so clever and well thought out. You had me at that line, "but you'd think I shouted, "Boo!", made me laugh out loud. An A1 write!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/24/2016 1:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Dineen! I'm glad you enjoyed. Your comment gave me a big smile. :) Thanks.
Date: 2/22/2016 3:19:00 PM
Roosters are really the "cock-of-the-walk" and so full of themselves (yet unappreciated). This piece was rip-roaring and your humor really gets to me ... very funny, Susan!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/24/2016 1:25:00 AM
:) Why Thank you Tim! Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 2/22/2016 9:47:00 AM
So much fun!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/24/2016 1:22:00 AM
Thank you Rick!
Date: 2/22/2016 5:29:00 AM
- Fred has an important job :) - A lovely poem, Susan - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/23/2016 12:21:00 AM
:) Thanks so much! Hugs...
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