Room With a View

Room with a view

I'll never forget the day we met,
my neck still hurts from turning my head,
First thing I know you were looking back,
You almost gave me a heart attack

I turned the corner and there you were,
looking all shy and so demure
I knew right then you were made for me
Isn't it funny how life can be?

Chorus 1
Who cares about a room with a view?
When I can stay here and look at you!
Who needs a view of Montserrat?
When I can see that you're looking back
Who cares about a room with a view?
When I can stay here and look at you
Who needs a view of Monaco?
When were here alone with the lights down low!

(you know that it's true yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah)
(you know that it's true yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah)

You and I have been all around the world,
Only been with you 'cause you're my kind of girl
Don't want to be with no one but you
Who cares about a room with a view?

(you know that it's true yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah)
(you know that it's true yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah)

Years gone by and you still turn my head,
I'd still rather look at you instead
I'll look at you till all fades to black,
as long as I see you're looking back

Chorus 2
Who cares about a room with a view?
When I can stay here and look at you
Who needs a view of Iguazu?*
When I can stay here and look at you
Who wants to see all of Cancun?
When we're all alone here in our room!

(you know that it's true yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah)
(you know that it's true yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah)

Years gone by and you still turn my head,
I'd still rather look at you instead
I'll look at you till all fades to black,
as long as I see you're looking back

(you know that it's true yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah)
(you know that it's true yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah)

repeat and fade to zero

*Iguazu pronounced Ee gwa zoo 
Series of waterfalls bordering Argentina, Paraguay and Brazil

John Derek Hamilton
June 12,2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 6/22/2019 8:36:00 PM
this is pure delight, john. a very fun song!
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/23/2019 8:13:00 AM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 6/22/2019 7:54:00 AM
Must be quite a girl! I love the places you mentioned, making this lyric sensational!
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/22/2019 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Kim, yeah she is amazing!
Date: 6/16/2019 3:10:00 PM
right down my alley, john... this is so touching and melodious, wow!... huggs
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/20/2019 1:54:00 PM
Thanks Nette I appreciate your kind words and visit!
Date: 6/13/2019 1:36:00 PM
... yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, I really like it John :) - A beautiful song :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/14/2019 12:18:00 PM
Yeah, yeah, I like your comment, thanks for your constant encouragement!
Date: 6/13/2019 7:56:00 AM
This is so so romantic, John..I loved the rhythm and flow of your song..and the words that would win any heart. Lively and happy like the sound of music.
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Date: 6/14/2019 12:17:00 PM
Thanks Vijay, I'm glad you liked it and came by and left your comment, always appreciated!
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