Romeo’s Drowning

Glistening moonlight casts a grey veil,
shining down on the boy afloat in a river.
Alone with thoughts, voices that aren’t his.

They cannot give you what you seek
The good ones are gone,
The bad ones are everywhere.

Meaningful devotion,
starving for connection.
Denied entry at hearts red gates

I’ve watched you from your cowardly eyes.
Struggling to find her,
while the world tries to make you choose.

Love is a weakness,
it’s choking you.
Sink into the darkness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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September 30, 2026 at 2:58 AM
The ending hits home for me ~ this is so very well written and the imagery and flow is seamless. Romeo is drowning and Juliet is bleeding ~ still. Somedays a little more than other days it feels like "The good ones are gone, The bad ones are everywhere." Pleasure readin you today Sendin you light always
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