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Romantic Thoughts - Nothing More

Every night Sea rises at high tide
His waves are like warm frothy fingers 
caressing Moon's golden glow on the shore
It's a game they play with ebb and flow
Hide and seek. She has a flirtacious streak
when shrouding herself behind a veil of clouds
Eternal lovers who share intimate moments
   romantic thoughts  ~  nothing more

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Jan Allison

May 3, 2025 at 1:51 AM

I've gone from reeding dark and creepy to your romance -im beginning to see there is no subject you cant write about so amazingly! hugs jan xx

Duke Beaufort

May 2, 2025 at 7:02 PM

Lin, this is poetic to the nth degree. The way you do this is really phenomenal. It's quite good...poet laureate stuff. Making it a fav. It should be one for the ages.

Lin Lane

May 2, 2025 at 7:56 PM

That's very kind of you, Duke. I'm appreciative of your support.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

May 1, 2025 at 6:33 PM

Very sooth smooth romantic poem! Very enjoyed read! Have a nice time ~ AA

Lin Lane

May 2, 2025 at 1:42 AM

Thanks a lot, AA.

Hilda Greenhough

May 1, 2025 at 12:50 PM

Picturesque and heartwarming, I love the metaphors.

Lin Lane

May 2, 2025 at 1:41 AM

Thank you very much, Hilda.

Paula Goldsmith

May 1, 2025 at 12:17 PM

Your "Romantic Thoughts - Nothing More" is a lovely write/story in just 8 lines. What a pretty picture you have here. Love your write and picture. Sure wish I was walking on your pretty beach feeling the sand and water on my feet. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun day writing away.............

Lin Lane

May 1, 2025 at 12:45 PM

It's not for a contest, Paula but thank you for liking this one. I've had that photo for some time, knowing it deserved a poem of some sort.

Ink Empress

May 1, 2025 at 10:15 AM

Wow this is absolutely breathtaking dear linnersz, i love the way you've written this moon poem in few words, youv delivered one that gives the wow effect which is impressive! As an islander that sees the ocean all around me, i resonated with the opening line "Every night Sea rises at high tide His waves are like warm frothy fingers " gives not just a romantic ambience but also a very passionate and intimate scene that is worthy of a fave! Gorgeous! Now i feel like painting! Pleasure reading!sending you light always

Lin Lane

May 1, 2025 at 10:19 AM

Thank you, Ink. I'm sure your views of Sea and Moon are just a lovely, if not more so. I personify them as that couple who are truly star-crossed lovers. Kinda makes me sad.