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Romantic My Heart Breathes Once Again

Rhythmic waves rose bending, beating Out of my heart into my soul breathing once again, Melting beneath the heavens hued in cherry blossoms. Another night to drown in your moonlight blue eyes, Nuzzle into your neck then taste your lips once again, Tangle my fingers through your silky chestnut hair. I don't ever want this night to end Caught in the lace work of your love. 2/14/2018

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Date: 2/22/2018 5:07:00 AM
so romantic Eve, many congratulations on you win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/20/2018 11:29:00 AM
Lovely Eve, congratulations...
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Date: 2/20/2018 1:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and on a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading this, Kai
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Date: 2/19/2018 11:37:00 AM
Well deserved, Sweetie - so happy to see this as #1!!!! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 2/19/2018 3:23:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your great first position win with a beautiful poem.
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Date: 2/19/2018 12:56:00 AM
What a gorgeous write, Eve, and so deserving of the win ... blessings and congrats for your win, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 2/18/2018 8:18:00 PM
Eve Many congrats on your TOP WIN. I liked your write. Regards,Sathya
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Date: 2/18/2018 7:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Eve. Tom
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Date: 2/18/2018 6:52:00 PM
Hope it got a first place. Congrats. I see it's a winner.
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Date: 2/18/2018 6:22:00 PM
Congrats, Eve!
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Date: 2/18/2018 4:28:00 PM
Eve, Yes, very romantic, congratulations on top spot! Mick
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Date: 2/18/2018 4:05:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win for your lovely romantic poem. Such a beautifully written Acrostic! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/18/2018 1:56:00 PM
Very romantic, Eve. Congrats on top honours.
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Date: 2/18/2018 1:15:00 PM
This was stunning Eve, the first time I read it I thought it was the winner, I read each entry at least 5 times, some I changed higher or lower, this one stayed in first from beginning to end, congrats on a lush write, and of course first place!
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Date: 2/18/2018 9:37:00 AM
Very nice, Sometimes im afraid other poems will creep into mine, but maybe not This is my try at romance https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/do_you_love_me_995240
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Date: 2/16/2018 9:08:00 PM
Eve, yours really captures the essence of romance. One of the very best I have seen yet for this challenge!
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Date: 2/16/2018 8:38:00 AM
Wow! I love this, Eve, especially that last line. Janice
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Date: 2/15/2018 10:41:00 AM
All right, so far I've read a handful of very romantic acrostics, but yours is the first my womanly bits actually felt an urge to crawl into! Superb in the spicy-hot, romantic department, Eve - it sure did the thing for me. Yi. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 2/15/2018 9:24:00 AM
The height of the romance is indeed enjoyable, Eve ...
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Date: 2/15/2018 7:50:00 AM
Beauty, beauty, beauty. Your alliteration and fluidity is on point. Great job, Eve:)
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Date: 2/15/2018 7:10:00 AM
You really do romance so well Eve...
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Date: 2/15/2018 6:48:00 AM
Great work..romance skillfully delivered in every line..best for a win, Eve.
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Date: 2/15/2018 4:34:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Eve - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/15/2018 3:30:00 AM
Wow. Wonderful, Orbital and Wished for to all. Kai
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Date: 2/15/2018 1:44:00 AM
Beautifully done Eve. Regards Tom
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