Romantic My Heart Breathes Once Again

Rhythmic waves rose bending, beating 
Out of my heart into my soul breathing once again,
Melting beneath the heavens hued in cherry blossoms. 
Another night to drown in your moonlight blue eyes,
Nuzzle into your neck then taste your lips once again,
Tangle my fingers through your silky chestnut hair. 
I don't ever want this night to end 
Caught in the lace work of your love.


2/14/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 5:07 AM
so romantic Eve, many congratulations on you win:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 11:29 AM
Lovely Eve, congratulations...
Neumann Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 1:07 AM
Congratulations on your win and on a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading this, Kai
Godwin Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 11:37 AM
Well deserved, Sweetie - so happy to see this as #1!!!! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 3:23 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your great first position win with a beautiful poem.
Barden Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 12:56 AM
What a gorgeous write, Eve, and so deserving of the win ... blessings and congrats for your win, my friend! :-) <3
Babu Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 8:18 PM
Eve Many congrats on your TOP WIN. I liked your write. Regards,Sathya
Cunningham Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 7:14 PM
Congratulations on your win Eve. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 6:52 PM
Hope it got a first place. Congrats. I see it's a winner.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 6:22 PM
Congrats, Eve!
Talbot Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 4:28 PM
Eve, Yes, very romantic, congratulations on top spot! Mick
Haight Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 4:05 PM
Eve, congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win for your lovely romantic poem. Such a beautifully written Acrostic! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Very romantic, Eve. Congrats on top honours.
Hamilton Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 1:15 PM
This was stunning Eve, the first time I read it I thought it was the winner, I read each entry at least 5 times, some I changed higher or lower, this one stayed in first from beginning to end, congrats on a lush write, and of course first place!
Acrich Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 9:37 AM
Very nice, Sometimes im afraid other poems will creep into mine, but maybe not This is my try at romance https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/do_you_love_me_995240
Dietrich Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 9:08 PM
Eve, yours really captures the essence of romance. One of the very best I have seen yet for this challenge!
Canerdy Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 8:38 AM
Wow! I love this, Eve, especially that last line. Janice
Godwin Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 10:41 AM
All right, so far I've read a handful of very romantic acrostics, but yours is the first my womanly bits actually felt an urge to crawl into! Superb in the spicy-hot, romantic department, Eve - it sure did the thing for me. Yi. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Gupta Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 9:24 AM
The height of the romance is indeed enjoyable, Eve ...
Payton Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Beauty, beauty, beauty. Your alliteration and fluidity is on point. Great job, Eve:)
One Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 7:10 AM
You really do romance so well Eve...
Pandit Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 6:48 AM
Great work..romance skillfully delivered in every line..best for a win, Eve.
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 4:34 AM
- A wonderful poem, Eve - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Neumann Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 3:30 AM
Wow. Wonderful, Orbital and Wished for to all. Kai
Cunningham Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 1:44 AM
Beautifully done Eve. Regards Tom
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