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Romantic Moon

beneath dusk twilight briskness of the night off a bumpy quiet foot path, deeper into root of virgin forest towards narrow a patch. breathless, beneath thick mixed coppice nightingales croon, nature sleeps. moon views with romantic pleasure upon scintillating obsidian hue lake. natures breath held briefest of hesitations fish breaks the surface ripples sweep swirling beyond the lake swept away in darkness. lovers in a canoe enthralled by sensation of nostalgic moon. 2/16/2020

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Date: 2/18/2020 6:03:00 PM
Sooo romantic, Eve. Wonderful imagery. Thanks for your recent contest!
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Date: 2/17/2020 1:20:00 PM
The mysterious and everlasting romance of moonlight. Lovers in a canoe. Well done. // Barry.
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Date: 2/16/2020 3:14:00 PM
Eve, I swear while I was reading this, that scene from the Littlest Mermaid came to mind. The scene where Ariel and the prince are in a boat and the crawdad or lobster and frogs are singing "Kiss the girl". very nice, Eve
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Date: 2/16/2020 11:59:00 AM
- Beautiful and vividly described, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/16/2020 6:32:00 AM
I love your clarity...the soul of the write...Nice images too
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Date: 2/16/2020 5:22:00 AM
Beautiful imagery.. Hundreds and hundreds of poets praised her beauty and died.. But still she come everyday, bewitching minds of wonderful souls to hear her praise.. Great poem..
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