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Romantic Love

Yesterday is tomorrow’s today In this game of life we play In the game of life we chance All we have on romance Shake the dice then let them roll Cross the bridge then pay the toll Make a wish upon a star Then let them see who you are Open your heart and face the task Open your soul and lose your mask Let romance light the fire That is forever fueled by desire Let your words be honest and true Be the things you say and do And most of all for the one you love Live your life for the Lord above Through his love your romantic endeavor Will be blessed and last forever And that’s a true gift by the Lord above For nothing is better than romantic love

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Jesu Johnson

Date: 10/12/2008 8:32:00 PM

I like the content of your poem.... it is a great piece. You are truly gifted!!!!

Janice Herzog

Date: 9/27/2008 12:49:00 PM

Dear Michael: I want to know what inspires you? This is just so beautiful, and romantic, really truly. Much Love, Janice Herzog xoxo

Darryl Ivery

Date: 8/27/2008 4:31:00 PM

You are truely a blessed writer. It so true, For when the Lord blesses you with love it gets no better than that.

Tony Hwilka

Date: 8/25/2008 1:54:00 AM

A very relaxing read and I like the flow. Tony

Glenn Ralph

Date: 8/23/2008 9:13:00 AM

Great advice for those seeking or invovled in romantic endeavors as I am! I just recently asked the woman of my dreams to marry me. We have been engaged since the 3rd of August this year. She's an amazing woman, and one that I shall cherish all the days of my life. Thanks for your wonderful poem, and thanks for your comments on my "Love's Wounding Blade" poem. Take care and God Bless you? Are you "THE" Michael Jordan? Just curious...thanks!

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/22/2008 7:41:00 AM

Maybe we are dinosaurs with archaic beliefs when we think of romance and beauty in today's society, but I'd rather be a dinosaur than a robot. This was one of your best. Vince

Teresita Cailo

Date: 8/21/2008 7:48:00 PM

Every line leaves an inspiration. Cheers, Teri

Angelia Dawson

Date: 8/21/2008 2:12:00 PM

this isa very heartfelt and a joy to read and a good message

Mohannad Khufash

Date: 8/18/2008 3:22:00 PM

great poem it is so truthful beautiful meaningful word great job

Marycile Beer

Date: 8/16/2008 1:02:00 PM

Very beautiful words my special son. I love your poem and I am going to put it in my favorites, Love you Mike, Mom Beer Tuesday I go to pay for my new home. Then in a few weeks I will be in our new home on the range. Where the mountains and clouds will forever be in my soul and maybe I will be able to do more writing. How are the novels going Mike? Mom Beer

Sara Lokken

Date: 8/15/2008 11:45:00 AM

Ah--sigh*--that's very beautiful. I also loved the verse about losing the mask and opening the soul. So truthful and stinging. Regards, Sara:)

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/12/2008 7:02:00 PM

Michael here here heartfelt indeed nothing like it love that is. its the highest of high but yet can be the lowest o f low! Great flow in your write! Laura :)

Heidie Buys

Date: 8/12/2008 4:45:00 PM

Perfectly written and so very touching. This one is a winner on all fronts. So very well done. Regards Heidie

Curt Mongold

Date: 8/12/2008 4:08:00 PM

Thank you.

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/12/2008 3:30:00 PM

Very sweet and romatic soul you have Michael!! Nicely done!! Fondly, Carrie

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/12/2008 3:08:00 PM

very adventerious brought back memories of being in love and being very shy. i always thought about the toll to be paid and facing the task. you know. john

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 8/12/2008 2:52:00 PM

Michaele, Wow!!! Your poem Romantic Love is full of desire and passion -beautiful rhyme and imagery -extremely pleasant to read. I love your comments on my poem You Didn't Come --Mohammad

James Foulk

Date: 8/12/2008 1:14:00 PM

touching, warm, and beautiful piece of well penned poetry. enjoyed it. thank you for reading my America's Forgotten Heroes and for your very kind comment

Deneen White

Date: 8/12/2008 12:22:00 PM

Hi Michael, this is a trule lovely romantic peice, I love it, ans thanks for the comments on my write, take care D-nyce

Kareem Musa

Date: 8/12/2008 11:33:00 AM

Great piece michael.

P Sheart

Date: 8/12/2008 9:32:00 AM

Hello Michael You are truly blessing to know of love in the balance of life's big picture. Your writing has such a natural flow that it makes a heartfelt impression on ones heart. A true joy to read. Many blessings to you and yours. Take care. Love Light Truth Patricia

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 8/12/2008 9:10:00 AM

You say true. You are blessed to have that love, dear - always, Kristin

Michaela Payne

Date: 8/12/2008 8:17:00 AM

Michael this was so beautiful!! When ever you write it's like flawless, and I finish reading with a sigh, I always love reading your stuff! Blessings ~Michaela~

Christy Hardy

Date: 8/12/2008 6:28:00 AM

I give this one a 10, a perfect 10...Great, wonderful, Always, Christy

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 8/12/2008 5:59:00 AM

The couplet styleis written perfectly here as the rhyme didn't skip a beat. The sentiment within the words rings so very true. Write on my friend, it's always a pleasure to read such beautiful poetry. Michael