Freddie Robinson Jr. Poet Verse

Romantic Invasion

Your conquering eyes desired to look inside,
wanted to know
what my uncharted heart had hidden within
So you sent a pleasure probe searching ...
exploring lips kissing virgin skin,
navigating delicately, moving in ...
inside the orifice of language
Communication goes silent,
as the tongue-touching negotiation ensues
Non-verbal persuasion cues
signal the launch of your romantic invasion
Your foreign hands hold firm
this body of land
which yields no resistance to your passionate demands
The fortress gates are open in my mind;
take what you will, take whatever you find
All the precious memories stored are now yours
Your intense conquistador curiosity,
which sparked this romantic invasion,
has changed the course of our personal history

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Charmaine Chircop January 28, 2017 at 11:28 PM Sensuality and Romance together indeed change the personal history ,from a vacant place to a warm cosy corner...Fantastic poetry.

Richard Lamoureux January 27, 2017 at 9:06 AM There can be no doubt that you are a poet my friend. 7! Freddie Robinson Jr. January 28, 2017 at 6:06 AM Ty, Richard. Appreciate the gracious words, my friend. L & P ~ always.

Cheryl Hoffman January 26, 2017 at 7:34 PM My eyes are still singed from reading this passionate write! P & L~Che Freddie Robinson Jr. January 28, 2017 at 6:05 AM Ty, Cheryl. Don't want them pretty eyes to get burned though. Lol! Appreciate the love and support from you, dear. Love & Hugs always.

Chris Green January 26, 2017 at 3:19 PM Is it warm in here or is it just your poetry? Damn Freddie, this one rocks my friend. So full of love and desire, a passionate write my friend. Freddie Robinson Jr. January 28, 2017 at 6:03 AM Ty, Chris. Sorry I had to turn up the heat on this one, that was the only way I could make it work. Appreciate the kind words though. L & P ~ always.

Alexis Y. January 26, 2017 at 12:36 PM WoW! Freddie, Once again I am wowed by your skillful pen. This is write is so clever and creative. I found it to be sooo darn romantic. I would welcome this kind of invasion. Well done my talented friend.A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis Freddie Robinson Jr. January 28, 2017 at 6:02 AM Ty, Alexis. You say the kindest things and are so supportive. I am always honored by your presence. L & P ~ always.

Oliver Muchuma January 26, 2017 at 8:42 AM great Freddie Robinson Jr. January 28, 2017 at 6:00 AM Ty, Oliver. Your kind words are very humbling to me. Love and peace to you always.

Joseph May January 26, 2017 at 8:36 AM Romance and passion in the language of love...Great write Freddie Freddie Robinson Jr. January 28, 2017 at 5:59 AM Ty, Joseph. Your kind comments are so appreciated by me. Love and more love to you and yours.

Pandita Sietesantos January 26, 2017 at 7:56 AM Whew! This is hot! hot! hot! Can't touch that! Beautifully sensuous and romantic! Excellent piece, Freddie! Pandita Freddie Robinson Jr. January 28, 2017 at 5:58 AM Ty, Pandita. Your really cool comments has got me hot. Appreciate the love and support given. Love and joy to you always, dear.

Probir Gupta January 26, 2017 at 7:32 AM Wonderfully romantic realisation ... a nice read ... Freddie Robinson Jr. January 28, 2017 at 5:55 AM Ty, Probir. I'm pleased that you liked it. Appreciate your kind comments always. P & L ~ always.