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Romantic Invasion

Your conquering eyes desired to look inside, wanted to know what my uncharted heart had hidden within So you sent a pleasure probe searching ... exploring lips kissing virgin skin, navigating delicately, moving in ... inside the orifice of language Communication goes silent, as the tongue-touching negotiation ensues Non-verbal persuasion cues signal the launch of your romantic invasion Your foreign hands hold firm this body of land which yields no resistance to your passionate demands The fortress gates are open in my mind; take what you will, take whatever you find All the precious memories stored are now yours Your intense conquistador curiosity, which sparked this romantic invasion, has changed the course of our personal history

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/28/2017 11:28:00 PM
Sensuality and Romance together indeed change the personal history ,from a vacant place to a warm cosy corner...Fantastic poetry.
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Date: 1/27/2017 9:06:00 AM
There can be no doubt that you are a poet my friend. 7!
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/28/2017 6:06:00 AM
Ty, Richard. Appreciate the gracious words, my friend. L & P ~ always.
Date: 1/26/2017 7:34:00 PM
My eyes are still singed from reading this passionate write! P & L~Che
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/28/2017 6:05:00 AM
Ty, Cheryl. Don't want them pretty eyes to get burned though. Lol! Appreciate the love and support from you, dear. Love & Hugs always.
Date: 1/26/2017 3:19:00 PM
Is it warm in here or is it just your poetry? Damn Freddie, this one rocks my friend. So full of love and desire, a passionate write my friend.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/28/2017 6:03:00 AM
Ty, Chris. Sorry I had to turn up the heat on this one, that was the only way I could make it work. Appreciate the kind words though. L & P ~ always.
Date: 1/26/2017 12:36:00 PM
WoW! Freddie, Once again I am wowed by your skillful pen. This is write is so clever and creative. I found it to be sooo darn romantic. I would welcome this kind of invasion. Well done my talented friend.A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/28/2017 6:02:00 AM
Ty, Alexis. You say the kindest things and are so supportive. I am always honored by your presence. L & P ~ always.
Date: 1/26/2017 8:42:00 AM
great
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/28/2017 6:00:00 AM
Ty, Oliver. Your kind words are very humbling to me. Love and peace to you always.
Date: 1/26/2017 8:36:00 AM
Romance and passion in the language of love...Great write Freddie
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/28/2017 5:59:00 AM
Ty, Joseph. Your kind comments are so appreciated by me. Love and more love to you and yours.
Date: 1/26/2017 7:56:00 AM
Whew! This is hot! hot! hot! Can't touch that! Beautifully sensuous and romantic! Excellent piece, Freddie! Pandita
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/28/2017 5:58:00 AM
Ty, Pandita. Your really cool comments has got me hot. Appreciate the love and support given. Love and joy to you always, dear.
Date: 1/26/2017 7:32:00 AM
Wonderfully romantic realisation ... a nice read ...
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/28/2017 5:55:00 AM
Ty, Probir. I'm pleased that you liked it. Appreciate your kind comments always. P & L ~ always.

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