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Romantic Invasion


Your conquering eyes desired to look inside,
wanted to know
what my uncharted heart had hidden within
So you sent a pleasure probe searching ...
exploring lips kissing virgin skin,
navigating delicately, moving in ...
inside the orifice of language
Communication goes silent,
as the tongue-touching negotiation ensues
Non-verbal persuasion cues
signal the launch of your romantic invasion
Your foreign hands hold firm
this body of land
which yields no resistance to your passionate demands
The fortress gates are open in my mind;
take what you will, take whatever you find
All the precious memories stored are now yours
Your intense conquistador curiosity,
which sparked this romantic invasion,
has changed the course of our personal history

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/28/2017 11:28:00 PM

Sensuality and Romance together indeed change the personal history ,from a vacant place to a warm cosy corner...Fantastic poetry.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/27/2017 9:06:00 AM

There can be no doubt that you are a poet my friend. 7!

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/28/2017 6:06:00 AM

Ty, Richard. Appreciate the gracious words, my friend. L & P ~ always.

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 1/26/2017 7:34:00 PM

My eyes are still singed from reading this passionate write! P & L~Che

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/28/2017 6:05:00 AM

Ty, Cheryl. Don't want them pretty eyes to get burned though. Lol! Appreciate the love and support from you, dear. Love & Hugs always.

Chris Green

Date: 1/26/2017 3:19:00 PM

Is it warm in here or is it just your poetry? Damn Freddie, this one rocks my friend. So full of love and desire, a passionate write my friend.

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/28/2017 6:03:00 AM

Ty, Chris. Sorry I had to turn up the heat on this one, that was the only way I could make it work. Appreciate the kind words though. L & P ~ always.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/26/2017 12:36:00 PM

WoW! Freddie, Once again I am wowed by your skillful pen. This is write is so clever and creative. I found it to be sooo darn romantic. I would welcome this kind of invasion. Well done my talented friend.A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/28/2017 6:02:00 AM

Ty, Alexis. You say the kindest things and are so supportive. I am always honored by your presence. L & P ~ always.