Mick Talbot Poet Heroic Couplet

Romantic Charm - Brown Eyes - Each Other's Love

BROWN EYES


I succumb to your brown eyes.
Begging, seductive, true, no lies!

Me, yours, both, in abandonment,
each other's love we compliment!

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2/13/18

'Romantic charm', in 4 lines contest, sponsored by Silent One

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Line Gauthier February 18, 2018 at 3:30 PM Congrats on your win, Mick. Well done. Mick Talbot February 18, 2018 at 10:08 PM Line, Thank you... Mick

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2018 at 6:39 PM It's nice to see this sweet poem on the winners' list tonight. BIG congrats, Mick. Mick Talbot February 15, 2018 at 10:13 PM Andrea, Many thanks, nice to be up there with you all... Mick

Tom Cunningham February 14, 2018 at 1:54 PM Back with congratulations Mick, well done. Regards Tom Mick Talbot February 14, 2018 at 6:45 PM Tom, Thanking you kindly... Best regards... Mick

Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2018 at 12:21 PM - Love is honesty ... a beautiful poem, Mick :) - Congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Mick Talbot February 14, 2018 at 6:43 PM Anne-Lise, My deepest thanks on both counts... hugs... Mick

Silent One February 14, 2018 at 9:07 AM Romantic lines mick.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Mick Talbot February 14, 2018 at 6:41 PM Many thanks Silent, appreciated... Mick

Alexis Y. February 13, 2018 at 5:18 PM WoW! Mick, In four lines you've managed to write a good a romantic write. Looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Mick Talbot February 13, 2018 at 5:36 PM Alexis, My deepest thanks on both counts... Mick

Darlene De Beaulieu February 13, 2018 at 5:03 PM Hello Mick,this is a romantic poem,I enjoyed to read. Good luck in the contest. Mick Talbot February 13, 2018 at 5:06 PM Darlene, My deepest thanks... Mick

Tom Cunningham February 13, 2018 at 4:29 PM Very romantic Mick. Good luck in the contest. Regards Tom Mick Talbot February 13, 2018 at 4:35 PM Tom, You are a charmer, now you've been told, me? A charmer, maybe, but not so bold! (In fun). Best regards... and thank you... Mick