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Romantic Autumn

I am standing under chromatic trees Watching the romance between leaves and breeze Autumn bride dressed in colorful attire dances with ebullience The groom breeze hovering around gently caresses her. Trees shower hued blessings on her endlessly Her colourful dress and gold ornaments glitter in sun As I walk, I hear her rustling love song Her happiness permeates surrounds; I'm filled with exhilaration Oh, my love, come, caress me Let me dance rapturously like an autumn leaf Rain me exhilarating overwhelming sensations that thrill and excite 10.10.2021 Poetic form couplet, imagism, choka Syllables checked at PS syllables counter

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Date: 11/24/2021 11:33:00 PM
"Oh, my love, come, caress me Let me dance rapturously like an autumn leaf" Such a beautiful personiication of Autumn. Glad I could find your beautiful poetry, Rama
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 11/25/2021 6:20:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 11/16/2021 12:21:00 AM
A great poem on Autumn. You have used many forms. The poem is flowing fluently.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 11/16/2021 6:48:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 10/14/2021 5:52:00 AM
Charming verse of love and romance. Enjoyed the tender voice of your poem, Rama. All the best.
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Date: 10/11/2021 10:58:00 AM
Very romantic verse Rama, like how you used the different forms. Tom
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Date: 10/11/2021 9:49:00 AM
This is so beautiful, Rama. Sweet, subtle with intensity and fire. Clever.
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Date: 10/11/2021 6:28:00 AM
Very creative poem, captures beauty and romance, Warm Regards, Theresa!
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Date: 10/10/2021 3:51:00 PM
beautiful and romantic and wonderful personification:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/10/2021 12:27:00 PM
You are so good at Free Verse. A lovely piece. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 10/10/2021 12:10:00 PM
Hello Rama, this is romantic. Enjoyed the read. Hugs.
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