Rama Balasubramanian Poet Verse

Romantic Autumn

 I am standing under chromatic trees
Watching the romance between leaves and breeze

Autumn bride
dressed in colorful attire
dances with ebullience

The groom breeze
hovering around
gently caresses her.

Trees shower hued
blessings on her
endlessly

Her colourful dress
and gold ornaments
glitter in sun

As I walk,
I hear her rustling
love song

Her happiness
permeates surrounds;
I'm filled with exhilaration

Oh, my love, come, caress me 
Let me dance rapturously
like an autumn leaf

Rain me exhilarating
overwhelming sensations
that thrill and excite


10.10.2021

Poetic form couplet, imagism, choka
Syllables checked at PS syllables counter

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Valsa George November 24, 2021 at 11:33 PM "Oh, my love, come, caress me Let me dance rapturously like an autumn leaf" Such a beautiful personiication of Autumn. Glad I could find your beautiful poetry, Rama Rama Balasubramanian November 25, 2021 at 6:20 AM Thanks

Christuraj Alex November 16, 2021 at 12:21 AM A great poem on Autumn. You have used many forms. The poem is flowing fluently. Rama Balasubramanian November 16, 2021 at 6:48 AM Thanks

Vijay Pandit October 14, 2021 at 5:52 AM Charming verse of love and romance. Enjoyed the tender voice of your poem, Rama. All the best.

Tom Cunningham October 11, 2021 at 10:58 AM Very romantic verse Rama, like how you used the different forms. Tom

Marilene Evans October 11, 2021 at 9:49 AM This is so beautiful, Rama. Sweet, subtle with intensity and fire. Clever.

Theresa Lynn October 11, 2021 at 6:28 AM Very creative poem, captures beauty and romance, Warm Regards, Theresa!

Jan Allison October 10, 2021 at 3:51 PM beautiful and romantic and wonderful personification:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux October 10, 2021 at 12:27 PM You are so good at Free Verse. A lovely piece. Blessings Rick.

Darlene De Beaulieu October 10, 2021 at 12:10 PM Hello Rama, this is romantic. Enjoyed the read. Hugs.