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romantic - haiku

romantic - haiku

steaming interlude
trembling geysers marking time
soft cloud at climax


3/3/2015
visual two

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Date: 3/13/2015 8:16:00 PM
John, I'm musing that third line as well.. Wow! Nice romantic win!
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Date: 3/11/2015 5:28:00 PM
Grats on your win, third line-wow, i like it :P)
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John lawless
Date: 3/11/2015 5:48:00 PM
Thanks Casarah for stopping by.
Date: 3/9/2015 1:00:00 AM
a great haiku of pure passion...congrats on your great win...hugs, Rhonda
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John lawless
Date: 3/11/2015 5:47:00 PM
Thanks Rhonda, glad you liked it.
Date: 3/8/2015 10:09:00 PM
I am so glad this did well in the contest John. Congratulations!
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John lawless
Date: 3/11/2015 5:45:00 PM
Connie, thanks for stopping by.
Date: 3/8/2015 6:16:00 PM
JOHN, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~
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John lawless
Date: 3/11/2015 5:47:00 PM
Thanks SKAT,
Date: 3/8/2015 11:54:00 AM
John, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/7/2015 6:42:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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John lawless
Date: 3/11/2015 5:45:00 PM
thanks Debbie
Date: 3/7/2015 3:16:00 PM
Congrats on a great win John
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John lawless
Date: 3/11/2015 5:44:00 PM
Thanks Joseph
Date: 3/7/2015 2:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win, John. A very romantic and nice interpretation of the visual. Sandra
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John lawless
Date: 3/11/2015 5:44:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, it is not easy to warm up to a haiku.
Date: 3/7/2015 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on a very well defined descriptive haiku
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John lawless
Date: 3/11/2015 5:43:00 PM
Thanks you Frederic, I find the haiku a troubling form but I do so enjoy a good struggle.
Date: 3/7/2015 11:02:00 AM
this is a wonderful haiku, 'steaming' indeed, very passionate; I particularly love that last line - congrats on your win!
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John lawless
Date: 3/11/2015 5:42:00 PM
Thanks Charlotte glad you like it.
Date: 3/7/2015 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations John! This is a definite favorite, as I love how each word is perfectly placed in the 'thimble' as if inscribed! Hugs, Kimberly
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John lawless
Date: 3/7/2015 7:49:00 AM
Thanks Kimberly for you kind words. Perhaps my next contest theme will be '''THIMBLES"""
Date: 3/7/2015 5:42:00 AM
Great haiku...CONGRATS
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John lawless
Date: 3/7/2015 7:13:00 AM
Thank you Rajat.
Date: 3/7/2015 4:52:00 AM
Beautifully sensual - i especially love the final line:-) Hugs Jan xx
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John lawless
Date: 3/7/2015 7:13:00 AM
Thanks Jan, these forms and this topic forced us to put the fullness of passion into the proverbial "thimble"...(I wonder how many supers know what a thimble is?). As I get older my language reaches the "archaic" stage.
Date: 3/6/2015 11:30:00 PM
EAch line was carefully laid out to create a superb haiku, John. The last line ending softly, though a climax, so romantically. congrats on your win.
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John lawless
Date: 3/7/2015 7:10:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, another great selection of photos to stimulate the muse.
Date: 3/4/2015 6:34:00 AM
John, your imagery.. Pops!
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John lawless
Date: 3/7/2015 7:09:00 AM
Ah, Dave, methinks there is a bit of a pun in your reply. thanks for stopping by and for your support.
Date: 3/3/2015 10:22:00 PM
Love this little Haiku John ....good luck in the contest .... Bev :)
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John lawless
Date: 3/7/2015 7:08:00 AM
Hey Bev, thanks for your support. This little Haiku hit the big time.