Romancing the Sun

hearts betrothed to eyes
elope at sunset’s beckon…
twilight honeymoon

-19 Sep 2014-
Creative Haiku - Poetry Contest
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Gibson Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 8:42 PM
Twilight honeymoon...love that! Congratulations.
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 8:01 PM
Congratulations on your win David
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 10:08 PM
oh yes, I sure remember THIS one. BIG congrats for making the winners' list with this gem.
Puddifoot Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 5:56 PM
this was another lovely romantic one (I received many!) I love 'twilight honeymoon', just beautiful - congrats on your win in my contest :)
Ebbs Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 5:47 PM
Congrats and smiles :)
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 5:44 PM
A great haiku! Congratulations on your win!
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 5:09 PM
ooh how romantic a haiku - many congrats on your win David. hugs Jan xxx
Onclaud Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 12:50 PM
a must-read 'ku, david... i like the 'twilight honeymoon'; simply arresting!.. huggs
Lindley Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 8:36 PM
This is a first class Haiku... I think it will do well in the contest. Not sure which contest but its very good..
Callus Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 9:05 AM
Lovely and romantic haiku, David. I do much believe in eyes and hearts working in unison. // paul
Chakrabarty Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 7:32 AM
OO a grand haiku. i am impressed. Love david.
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 9:23 PM
this is so sweet!! I love this whole idea of a twilight honeymoon!
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