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Romancing the Stone

My Rock, strong tower
Your strength draws me
Into your presence come
Oh! you great magnolia flower

Solid strong unmoveable
Your love for me was first....
Adoring the unloveable
With a love that is transformable

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Edward Ford

February 11, 2010 at 5:28 PM

Very nice a poem I'm sure most can relate to, I can for sure take me to simpler times

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

February 11, 2010 at 8:02 AM

really a different write from you Sarah and like to see more of this from you good strong poem great job

Andrea Dietrich

February 10, 2010 at 4:34 PM

What an awesome little poem, sara, and thanks for your sincere comments on my dad poem. REally not much I can write on him. When my mom first met him, he was like this amazing valedictorian, football star type guy. Mental illness ruins people's potential. LUv, Andrea

Joshua Lacey

February 10, 2010 at 4:01 PM

God's love sure is powerful! :)

James Fraser

February 10, 2010 at 12:26 PM

Excellent Quatrain Sara >> James

Lynette Chachere

February 10, 2010 at 9:36 AM

powerful. to feel anothers warmth even if they aren't there. -Always Lynette

Milton Toran

February 10, 2010 at 8:17 AM

A splendid piece of writing! Thank you for sharing. Peace, Milt

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 10, 2010 at 6:22 AM

And, Sara, upon the Rock of truth comes the transformation...excellently. Very nice poetry. Smiling, Dane Ann

Gert W. Knop

February 10, 2010 at 3:10 AM

Very emotional and beautiful Qoatrain, Sara! Thank you for your comments...Gert

Brian Strand

February 9, 2010 at 11:42 PM

Great last line Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and comments today

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 9, 2010 at 7:42 PM

Beautiful Quatrain Sara.. your first line is impressive... thankxxx for sharing and I must say reading your poems is not only a joy but a comfort on a snowy night... luv.. Linda_Marie

Daniel Cheeseman

February 9, 2010 at 2:37 PM

Great write here Sara so full of feeling, enjoyed Daniel

John Freeman

February 9, 2010 at 11:43 AM

Oh how I love this Sara. And your title, Brilliant! Oh how we need to spend some time romancing the stone. The intimacy of that relationship would surely be the transformation of totality of the being. Sincerely, Moses