Joanna Daniel Poet Rubaiyat

Romancing Summer

The sun is a shining, 
My heart is a pining, 
Bright summer is here,
The hammock reclining,

I'm going a swimming, 
My heart is a brimming, 
Cool water calls out,
I'm already dreaming,

Light flowers are dancing, 
My heart is romancing, 
With melting ice creams,
Summer is entrancing.



10/22/18

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Deb Radke October 29, 2018 at 11:31 PM Your poem said it all with humor, wit and a minimum of words. I love it! Best wishes. Deb

Lyric Man October 29, 2018 at 4:04 PM I’m melting into your warm words.. wow!!

Gordon Mcconnell October 28, 2018 at 4:20 PM A smashing little piece Jo, such great rhyme and flow, Have blessed day, Gordon PS: still praying for your situation, any update?

Connie Marcum Wong October 27, 2018 at 1:05 PM A delightful poem that celebrates so many of the attributes of summer. A poetic treat Jo! Mahalo! : )

Pashang Salehi October 26, 2018 at 6:02 PM Very nice Jo... You are an honorary Persian now. I wrote one for four seasons, you might like it.

Alexis Y. October 25, 2018 at 4:22 PM Hi Jo, You painted such a beautiful picture with words. I really enjoyed what I saw:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen October 25, 2018 at 12:58 PM - Sounds delicious ... winter is approaching here, Jo :) - Love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior October 24, 2018 at 5:20 PM Too bad we can't romance summer now...lovely verse my friend...love & light...^WW^

Silent One October 23, 2018 at 8:26 AM Lovely words Jo...

Andrea Dietrich October 22, 2018 at 6:43 PM this is so light, lyrical and charming . I love it!

Kim Rodrigues October 22, 2018 at 10:56 AM Feel like I’m swinging on that hammock! Delightful, Jo!

Heidi Sands October 22, 2018 at 7:50 AM This is a fun poem to read. Summer has ended so quickly and it is nice to return to it with this poem :)

Vijay Pandit October 22, 2018 at 6:58 AM Your joyous, bouncy words read like rhythm and dance, Jo. It's getting cooler here..so I appreciate reading this tribute to summer.