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Romancing Summer

The sun is a shining, My heart is a pining, Bright summer is here, The hammock reclining, I'm going a swimming, My heart is a brimming, Cool water calls out, I'm already dreaming, Light flowers are dancing, My heart is romancing, With melting ice creams, Summer is entrancing. 10/22/18

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Date: 10/29/2018 11:31:00 PM
Your poem said it all with humor, wit and a minimum of words. I love it! Best wishes. Deb
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Date: 10/29/2018 4:04:00 PM
I’m melting into your warm words.. wow!!
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Date: 10/28/2018 4:20:00 PM
A smashing little piece Jo, such great rhyme and flow, Have blessed day, Gordon PS: still praying for your situation, any update?
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Date: 10/27/2018 1:05:00 PM
A delightful poem that celebrates so many of the attributes of summer. A poetic treat Jo! Mahalo! : )
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Date: 10/26/2018 6:02:00 PM
Very nice Jo... You are an honorary Persian now. I wrote one for four seasons, you might like it.
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Date: 10/25/2018 4:22:00 PM
Hi Jo, You painted such a beautiful picture with words. I really enjoyed what I saw:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/25/2018 12:58:00 PM
- Sounds delicious ... winter is approaching here, Jo :) - Love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/24/2018 5:20:00 PM
Too bad we can't romance summer now...lovely verse my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 10/23/2018 8:26:00 AM
Lovely words Jo...
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Date: 10/22/2018 6:43:00 PM
this is so light, lyrical and charming . I love it!
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Date: 10/22/2018 10:56:00 AM
Feel like I’m swinging on that hammock! Delightful, Jo!
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Date: 10/22/2018 7:50:00 AM
This is a fun poem to read. Summer has ended so quickly and it is nice to return to it with this poem :)
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Date: 10/22/2018 6:58:00 AM
Your joyous, bouncy words read like rhythm and dance, Jo. It's getting cooler here..so I appreciate reading this tribute to summer.
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