Romance,Love And

H ey girl you remind me of an angel E mereld your eyes attract me always A lthough never talked to you but I guess V ery sweet your voice like chimes of a bell E vening prayer's chanting from the temple N ever could I touch your beautiful face L et me touch its velvetness and caress Y our angelic face hey my sweet angel. Two eloping hearts evergreen like equatorial rainforests entwined in the eternal escalator of love leaving a trail of lovely lavender fragrance her touchscreen face tempting him to touch to caress carelessly and to bring about cascaded tapestry . And he started caressing her face Between her two brows his fingers stopped momentarily Causing her to open her dreamy eyes questionably Demanding more tip-toeing of his fingers downwards Eventually his fingers stopped at the softness of her lips. © kashinath karmakar (8th July 2011) ===================000====================== Placement: 3rd; (July 2011) Contest:Aye, Aye,and a Mistress Sponsor:Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 7/19/2011 11:36:00 AM
Awesome. Many congratulations, Kash : )
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Date: 7/19/2011 9:19:00 AM
such a lover ;) congrad's on your win! [words of 4 letters or more are capitalized in a title ;)] Light & Love
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Date: 7/19/2011 7:34:00 AM
heavenly, kashi...congrats on a well deserved glowing award! grrreat stuff... : ) huggs
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Date: 7/19/2011 5:26:00 AM
Congratulations Kashinath on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Aye, Aye, and A Mistress"contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2011 5:24:00 AM
Beautiful, Kash. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
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Date: 7/18/2011 7:08:00 PM
Congrats Kashinath on your spectacular win in Debbie's contest with this fantastic creation my friend.. anotheer wow win..so creative...
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Date: 7/11/2011 8:45:00 PM
Someone knows their forms :) Thanks so much for noticing I'm 1001 WOW! Light & Love
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Date: 7/11/2011 5:50:00 AM
And a whole lot to leave up to the imagination Kash :) Love your entry, hope Deb's love it too :)
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Date: 7/9/2011 12:13:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in Debbie's contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work...Sara
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Date: 7/9/2011 9:25:00 AM
Beautiful poems, Kash : )
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Date: 7/9/2011 7:19:00 AM
wow ..Kash u just blew me away reading this awesome melodic poetry my friend.. meeting the challenge of the contest full force with exotic beautiful romantic words.. truly Heavenly ..good luck with thhis wonderful write..
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Date: 7/8/2011 11:33:00 PM
whoo, a splendid piece.. check with debbie if you need to do A-z! winning's bets, kashi.. come again; have a new one!! awhh, i'm a bi behind, lol..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/8/2011 9:52:00 PM
Romance,love and....???
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