Romance,Love And

H ey girl you remind me of an angel E mereld your eyes attract me always A lthough never talked to you but I guess V ery sweet your voice like chimes of a bell E vening prayer's chanting from the temple N ever could I touch your beautiful face L et me touch its velvetness and caress Y our angelic face hey my sweet angel. Two eloping hearts evergreen like equatorial rainforests entwined in the eternal escalator of love leaving a trail of lovely lavender fragrance her touchscreen face tempting him to touch to caress carelessly and to bring about cascaded tapestry . And he started caressing her face Between her two brows his fingers stopped momentarily Causing her to open her dreamy eyes questionably Demanding more tip-toeing of his fingers downwards Eventually his fingers stopped at the softness of her lips. © kashinath karmakar (8th July 2011) ===================000====================== Placement: 3rd; (July 2011) Contest:Aye, Aye,and a Mistress Sponsor:Debbie Guzzi
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Horne Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 11:36 AM
Awesome. Many congratulations, Kash : )
Guzzi Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 9:19 AM
such a lover ;) congrad's on your win! [words of 4 letters or more are capitalized in a title ;)] Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 7:34 AM
heavenly, kashi...congrats on a well deserved glowing award! grrreat stuff... : ) huggs
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations Kashinath on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Aye, Aye, and A Mistress"contest. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 5:24 AM
Beautiful, Kash. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
Sweetheart Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 7:08 PM
Congrats Kashinath on your spectacular win in Debbie's contest with this fantastic creation my friend.. anotheer wow win..so creative...
Guzzi Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 8:45 PM
Someone knows their forms :) Thanks so much for noticing I'm 1001 WOW! Light & Love
Neels Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 5:50 AM
And a whole lot to leave up to the imagination Kash :) Love your entry, hope Deb's love it too :)
Kendrick Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 12:13 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in Debbie's contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work...Sara
Horne Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 9:25 AM
Beautiful poems, Kash : )
Sweetheart Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 7:19 AM
wow ..Kash u just blew me away reading this awesome melodic poetry my friend.. meeting the challenge of the contest full force with exotic beautiful romantic words.. truly Heavenly ..good luck with thhis wonderful write..
Onclaud Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 11:33 PM
whoo, a splendid piece.. check with debbie if you need to do A-z! winning's bets, kashi.. come again; have a new one!! awhh, i'm a bi behind, lol..:) huggs, nette
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July 8, 2011 at 9:52 PM
Romance,love and....???
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