Romance the Chance

This coldness still, untrue; unreal Consumed by doubt, more cracks in the wall - For certain I loath all that I feel (Lost in the Beauty of my fateful fall) Dry of words, and void of strength, I try and save my dying chance (I never thought I'd trek this length) But, Lo! I dance a dead Romance...

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/25/2013 9:09:00 PM

Chan...you are accurate in your blogs...your poetry is natural and original! Jimbo

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/26/2013 6:22:00 AM

I sincerely appreciate that, Jimbo; thanks for stopping by :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/25/2013 3:37:00 PM

This poem seemed to flow effortlessly from your pen. A very passionate write, and it is one that many of us can relate to. Excellent poem!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/26/2013 6:24:00 AM

Thanks, SP! I guess "lost love" does have a certain universal appeal, but that's the only relatable line in the whole piece, I think. But thanks for dropping by <3

Joseph Matose

Date: 10/25/2013 6:11:00 AM

WOW, my friend. This is a passionate piece well crafted. I salute you Archaic. Keep up the Rhyme! Friend, JM

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/25/2013 7:05:00 AM

A thousand thanks as always, JM; thanks for popping in and for the reviews this morning :)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 10/24/2013 5:57:00 AM

Excellent write. I really enjoyed this one from you friend.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/24/2013 9:22:00 AM

Always look forward to your reviews, Mustapha :)

Robin Davis

Date: 10/19/2013 5:00:00 PM

HEY !!! This is a sad and truthful write about love and the heartache of it. Nice job my friend Hugs

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/23/2013 6:57:00 AM

Many thanks, Robin! :)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 10/19/2013 12:02:00 PM

A very realistic perspective of love and angst. It inspired me to write some lines. (Check your last line again, something's off)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/19/2013 12:16:00 PM

ARGH! Thank you for spotting that. I'm usually a careful proof-reader, but when I know a line in my head, I will hear it and not read it. <3