Jan Allison Poet Monorhyme

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Romance In the Rain

We strolled for an hour in a rain shower 
My face looked quite sour, I felt very dour
You found a wild flower I didn’t glower!
By a tall tower we found a bower
I laid our picnic for us to devour
You kissed me with power I didn’t cower!

Rhymers Delight Contest
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6 lines 10 syllables checked with how many syllables

01~07~17

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Darren White January 15, 2017 at 10:06 AM I love it Jan, even though it rained and you looked sour :) Congratulations!

Mark Martin January 12, 2017 at 3:39 PM Creative Jan. Like it! Congrats! :-)

Sandra Haight January 10, 2017 at 7:06 PM A great poem with internal/ending Monorhymes, Jan. At least the story ended happily! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Paul Schneiter January 10, 2017 at 6:14 PM Jan is anything but a fouler all her poems you may scour. * * * Oh such fun combined with extraordinary creativity. Thanks for sharing, Jan. hugs x x x

Paul Callus January 10, 2017 at 3:24 PM I find that rain and romance have a lot in common...they both produce heavenly music! Congratulations on this fine win, Jan! Hugs // paul

Joanna Daniel January 10, 2017 at 5:24 AM A lovely romantic monorhyme, Jan:) congratulations:)

Lewis Nyaga January 9, 2017 at 11:45 PM Jan.. beautiful poem you have penned, and the rhyme masterfully delivered..//Hugs & blessings

Janis Medders Tobechi January 9, 2017 at 11:37 PM Sounds like a very romantic tryst. Well written and congrats.

Afzal Nusker January 9, 2017 at 10:47 PM Quite frolicking must have been that picnic. Congratulations on your win.

Joseph May January 9, 2017 at 1:58 PM A romantic stroll ending with a kiss...Nicely penned Jan Jan Allison January 9, 2017 at 6:23 PM Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green January 9, 2017 at 6:35 AM Really well done Jan and I loved the theme. This flowed smoothly and the rhymes we spot on. Beautifully written my friend. Good luck in the contest. Jan Allison January 9, 2017 at 8:10 AM Thanks Chris I found it quite a challenge I hope John likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe January 8, 2017 at 8:14 PM I like your rhymes, Jan. Good luck in the contest. Jan Allison January 9, 2017 at 1:19 AM Thanks Agnes it was quite challenge:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich January 8, 2017 at 6:22 PM very cool how you got all the rhymes in and I think they were all , for ME, true rhymes. I am seeing others not using all perfect rhymes in their poems. Hope you place, sweetie! Jan Allison January 9, 2017 at 1:18 AM I use rhymezone which seems to cater for the US dialect so I hope John likes my poem I did find it quite a challenge to write and get some sort of story running through it:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop January 8, 2017 at 3:21 PM WoW..You are such a charming and romantic lady..Lovely sweet friend. Jan Allison January 8, 2017 at 4:06 PM Pure fiction for the contest Charma lol I find writing romance difficult and it was a really challenging contest with the rhyme scheme:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Rigoler January 8, 2017 at 11:52 AM Good use of monorhymes, Jan. See your inbox for my email. Thanks as always for stopping by. BTW, we had 11 inches of snow dropped on us last night! And it's only January! / M Jan Allison January 8, 2017 at 4:05 PM Thanks for the mail Maurice I do appreciate your support in my writing endeavours:- Oh gosh all that snow stay safe and warm and don't go out unless you have to!:-) hugs jan xx Our little Island grinds to a halt when snow falls lol

Augustus Black January 8, 2017 at 6:26 AM How sweet and full of romance this poem is. You have got a great writing rhythm in this form. It just looks like a great love story, a very powerful and courageous love. I like your actions in this write. This will defiantly get good ranking. All the best for the contest. Augustus Black January 8, 2017 at 9:42 AM Ya! He will like it. Jan Allison January 8, 2017 at 7:00 AM Thanks for such a postivie comment Augustus. I found it quite a challenging write and I hope John likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

John Beam January 7, 2017 at 7:41 PM Don't kiss and tell, written well and this poem well, it is also:) John Beam January 7, 2017 at 7:48 PM yes, with meaning but you got it! Jan Allison January 7, 2017 at 7:42 PM Thanks so much John I found the monorhyme quite a challenge to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso January 7, 2017 at 7:04 PM Ok I have to admit, I am a good kisser!!! This is so beautiful! Darren White January 15, 2017 at 10:04 AM LOL, pics or it didn't happen! Jan Allison January 7, 2017 at 7:15 PM Shhh Arthur I was trying to keep our friendship secret now its in the open lol!!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Phatt Matt January 7, 2017 at 4:53 PM beautiful you will come out tops goodluck!~phatt Jan Allison January 7, 2017 at 5:14 PM Thanks Phatt it was quite a challenge I hope John likes my poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. January 7, 2017 at 4:47 PM Hi Jan, This is good take on the contest theme. You painted lovely picture with your words. I liked what I saw. I wish you the best luck in the contest:-) Alexis Alexis Y. January 7, 2017 at 6:02 PM I found it to a challenge too:-) Alexis Jan Allison January 7, 2017 at 5:15 PM Thanks Alexis I found the rhyming quite a challenge!:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith January 7, 2017 at 2:08 PM Great Monorhyme Jan, best wishes in the contest... Jan Allison January 7, 2017 at 5:15 PM Thanks Charlie I don't think I've written this form before it was quite a challenge:-) hugs Jan xx

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 7, 2017 at 1:38 PM You have painted a lovely picture, here. Good luck in the contest. Jan Allison January 7, 2017 at 5:15 PM Thanks Dane Ann:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen January 7, 2017 at 12:55 PM - Not always tempting to be romantic in the rain ... wet and cold - A lovely poem, Jan - Good luck in the contest - I been at Stord today :) - ... the last week I tried to post some small "smile poems" ... but, it is you who are expert in that area :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison January 7, 2017 at 5:16 PM I was only talking with mum about Stord last week and what a beautiful country you live in - its great for her to reminisce gets her memory working!:-) hugs Jan xx