Romance in Summer

carried on the breeze
tender eyes, a bright sun smile
let linger
for a while 
first summer love's memories

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Karen Jones

June 29, 2025 at 1:42 PM

Melodic like a breeze of good memories! Congratulations!

David Crandall

June 29, 2025 at 6:05 PM

Thanks Karen!

Andrea Dietrich

June 29, 2025 at 12:23 PM

so sweet and romantic. Congrats, David.

David Crandall

June 29, 2025 at 6:05 PM

Thanks Andrea!

David Crandall

June 29, 2025 at 6:04 PM

Thanks Andrea!

Paula Goldsmith

June 29, 2025 at 10:08 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Romance in Summer" write. Love your last line. Have a blessed day with your win...........

David Crandall

June 29, 2025 at 10:47 AM

Thanks Paula!