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Romance In Morning's Field

*Line One is from Vijay Pandit's Poem: The last goodbye "Breezing trees heard the whisper of leaves." My love and I heard them too that day as we lay in a field of blooms - blooms kissed by the morning’s dew. I knew those daisies swaying could hear wind’s whispers. How they did dance, pleasing the eye of my love and I at that lovely time of romance! Joining in with the whispering wind, the birds in the breezing trees were sweetly singing a serenade. Such a beautiful reprise! Blue butterflies fluttered nearby. Our morning ended with this: my love with his eyes blue like the sky gave me a butterfly kiss! April 20, 2020 for Silent One's Poetic Lines From A Poetry Soup Poet - Vijay Pandit Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/5/2020 11:34:00 PM
Congratulations for your win. I love butterflies. I have had butterflies on me. Never a kiss from one of them. Enjoy your day and win.......
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Date: 5/5/2020 10:43:00 PM
Happy Cinco de Mayo and sincere congratulations for your win in Brian's contest, Andrea - keep up the great work! I hope you are staying safe and sound, My Friend - blessings! :o) <3
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Date: 5/5/2020 10:42:00 AM
Andrea! Congratulations on your top placement with butterfly kisses and you know how I love butterfly kisses! This romantic poem is as delicate and soft as butterfly wings. So pretty.
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Date: 5/5/2020 8:28:00 AM
Wow wow wow Interestingly Mind blow Pleasing Teasing Loving I felt me in the scene
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 5/5/2020 9:02:00 AM
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Date: 5/5/2020 7:36:00 AM
Congratulations! A lovely butterfly rendering!
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Date: 5/3/2020 8:22:00 PM
This is sweet and on wings! It flutters me. Congrats Andrea!
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Date: 5/3/2020 6:34:00 AM
butterfly kiss must have been so gentle... lovely and romantic poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 4/23/2020 11:22:00 AM
A wonderful tenderness flows through this write Andrea, true love . Well penned, very creative and imaginative. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/21/2020 12:46:00 PM
This is a lovely poem, Andrea. The flow and rhythm, a feast for the ears. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/21/2020 8:43:00 AM
Tender, loving verses of romance--enjoyed the sweet tone, Andrea.
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Date: 4/21/2020 8:37:00 AM
This has a magical quality. Good luck in the contest Andrea.
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Date: 4/21/2020 2:05:00 AM
Sweet and lovely poem.. Great entry in the contest Andrea.. Good luck..
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Date: 4/21/2020 1:21:00 AM
This has such a swishy-feel about it, it appears to be moving, visual. "sweetly singing a serenade." - nicely alliterative also in spots.
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Date: 4/20/2020 7:40:00 PM
This is wonderful Andrea..a nice flow
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Date: 4/20/2020 4:30:00 PM
My ex had the bluest eyes and I wanted to marry him in a meadow, this reminded me of that, painlessly I should add ;), gorgeous write. xomo!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/20/2020 5:15:00 PM
Lol, no, but he was beautiful. His mother's 40 acres of wild Canadian Shield was gorgeous.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/20/2020 4:54:00 PM
awww, thanks. I bet the ex was gorgeous.
Date: 4/20/2020 4:22:00 PM
This is sweet, Andrea. Nothing like a hybrid of nature and romance to make you feel good all over! Well done.
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Date: 4/20/2020 3:43:00 PM
His line inspired you well Andrea, well written, good luck, stay safe. Tom
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