Andrea Dietrich Poet Quatrain

Romance In Morning's Field

*Line One is from Vijay Pandit's Poem: The last goodbye

"Breezing trees heard the whisper of leaves."
My love and I heard them too
that day as we lay in a field of blooms -
blooms kissed by the morning’s dew.

I knew those daisies swaying could hear
wind’s whispers. How they did dance,
pleasing the eye of my love and I
at that lovely time of romance!

Joining in with the whispering wind,
the birds in the breezing trees
were sweetly singing a serenade.
Such a beautiful reprise!

Blue butterflies fluttered nearby.
Our morning ended with this:
my love with his eyes blue like the sky
gave me a butterfly kiss!

April 20, 2020 for Silent One's Poetic Lines From A Poetry Soup Poet - Vijay Pandit Poetry Contest

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Paula Goldsmith May 5, 2020 at 11:34 PM Congratulations for your win. I love butterflies. I have had butterflies on me. Never a kiss from one of them. Enjoy your day and win.......

Gregory Richard Barden May 5, 2020 at 10:43 PM Happy Cinco de Mayo and sincere congratulations for your win in Brian's contest, Andrea - keep up the great work! I hope you are staying safe and sound, My Friend - blessings! :o) <3

Sam Kauffman May 5, 2020 at 10:42 AM Andrea! Congratulations on your top placement with butterfly kisses and you know how I love butterfly kisses! This romantic poem is as delicate and soft as butterfly wings. So pretty.

Gideon Idudje May 5, 2020 at 8:28 AM Wow wow wow Interestingly Mind blow Pleasing Teasing Loving I felt me in the scene Gideon Idudje May 5, 2020 at 9:02 AM Fecilitation

Kim Rodrigues May 5, 2020 at 7:36 AM Congratulations! A lovely butterfly rendering!

Lonna Blodgett May 3, 2020 at 8:22 PM This is sweet and on wings! It flutters me. Congrats Andrea!

Silent One May 3, 2020 at 6:34 AM butterfly kiss must have been so gentle... lovely and romantic poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Jennifer Proxenos April 23, 2020 at 11:22 AM A wonderful tenderness flows through this write Andrea, true love . Well penned, very creative and imaginative. Blessings, Jennifer.

Probir Gupta April 21, 2020 at 12:46 PM This is a lovely poem, Andrea. The flow and rhythm, a feast for the ears. Good luck in the contest.

Vijay Pandit April 21, 2020 at 8:43 AM Tender, loving verses of romance--enjoyed the sweet tone, Andrea.

Richard Lamoureux April 21, 2020 at 8:37 AM This has a magical quality. Good luck in the contest Andrea.

Jenish Somadas April 21, 2020 at 2:05 AM Sweet and lovely poem.. Great entry in the contest Andrea.. Good luck..

Caren Krutsinger April 21, 2020 at 1:21 AM This has such a swishy-feel about it, it appears to be moving, visual. "sweetly singing a serenade." - nicely alliterative also in spots.

Ts Poetry April 20, 2020 at 7:40 PM This is wonderful Andrea..a nice flow

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 20, 2020 at 4:30 PM My ex had the bluest eyes and I wanted to marry him in a meadow, this reminded me of that, painlessly I should add ;), gorgeous write. xomo! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 20, 2020 at 5:15 PM Lol, no, but he was beautiful. His mother's 40 acres of wild Canadian Shield was gorgeous. Andrea Dietrich April 20, 2020 at 4:54 PM awww, thanks. I bet the ex was gorgeous.

John Watt April 20, 2020 at 4:22 PM This is sweet, Andrea. Nothing like a hybrid of nature and romance to make you feel good all over! Well done.

Tom Cunningham April 20, 2020 at 3:43 PM His line inspired you well Andrea, well written, good luck, stay safe. Tom