Debra Squyres Poet Limerick

Rolling Lotto Ticket

My lotto ticket done fell on the floor
Old floor fan blew it right out the door
Chased it out to the road
And my eyes did behold
It rolled away on the tire of a Ford


Written for: Susan Burch's "Lottery Ticket Limerick"
1-10-12

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Robert Johnson November 21, 2012 at 9:14 AM Better go get your powerball ticket and pin it to the board. So if it wins, it will bring grins, instead of being run over by a Ford. Good luck! :):):)

Ralph Taylor January 16, 2012 at 8:23 PM Congrats, Deb. Excellent. Nice going. luv Ralph

Kim Merryman January 16, 2012 at 3:26 PM Cute, Debra! Congrats on your win. Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown January 16, 2012 at 11:38 AM Congratulations on your win in Susan Burch's "Lottery Ticket Limerick" contest Debra. Love, Carol

David Williams January 16, 2012 at 7:53 AM Deb, congrats on your win..David

Christopher Bunton January 16, 2012 at 7:09 AM congratulations

Nette Onclaud January 16, 2012 at 5:52 AM there goes the luck, debra.. but winning here is much more fun!.. congrats!!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2012 at 4:24 PM I like the country sound of this one with "done fell on the floor!" Cute one. I would have placed this one higher! Congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 15, 2012 at 12:51 PM congrats Debra on an exciting win for this lottery Limerick luv.. good one..

Gwendolen Song January 13, 2012 at 4:14 PM DEBRA SQUYRES!!!! (This means I am YELLING!)...how did I miss this one???...wow. I love this as a formidable winning write for the contest. It is fabulous!! The title alone wrapped around the tire of a FORD..Fun stuff here, gal! Love, GWendolen

Janet Vick January 12, 2012 at 6:13 AM Sure hope it wasn't the winning ticket! Cute limerick. Take care. Janet

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer January 11, 2012 at 5:31 PM So cute Debra-I think Susan will love it!

Suzanne C. Goudreau January 11, 2012 at 5:12 PM A humourous and witty read! Wow! You are an awesome poet and have the ability to write on so many different formats! Congratulations Debra and million thx for your comments on mine!

Nette Onclaud January 11, 2012 at 10:26 AM oh my... what if you won?.. a greeeat tickler; love it, debra.. winning's best!..:) huggs!

Red Fiery January 11, 2012 at 9:33 AM HAHAHA...I AM REALLY EXCITED TO KNOW THE RESULTS...THIS WAS A FUN TO READ..CHEERED ME UP !

Cheryle Sanders January 11, 2012 at 8:00 AM Very funny, good luck in the contest! chez x

Michael J. Falotico January 11, 2012 at 7:35 AM LOL very good piece for the contest... luv Michael