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Rolling Lotto Ticket

My lotto ticket done fell on the floor Old floor fan blew it right out the door Chased it out to the road And my eyes did behold It rolled away on the tire of a Ford Written for: Susan Burch's "Lottery Ticket Limerick" 1-10-12

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Robert Johnson

Date: 11/21/2012 9:14:00 AM

Better go get your powerball ticket and pin it to the board. So if it wins, it will bring grins, instead of being run over by a Ford. Good luck! :):):)

Ralph Taylor

Date: 1/16/2012 8:23:00 PM

Congrats, Deb. Excellent. Nice going. luv Ralph

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/16/2012 3:26:00 PM

Cute, Debra! Congrats on your win. Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/16/2012 11:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Susan Burch's "Lottery Ticket Limerick" contest Debra. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 1/16/2012 7:53:00 AM

Deb, congrats on your win..David

Christopher Bunton

Date: 1/16/2012 7:09:00 AM

congratulations

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/16/2012 5:52:00 AM

there goes the luck, debra.. but winning here is much more fun!.. congrats!!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2012 4:24:00 PM

I like the country sound of this one with "done fell on the floor!" Cute one. I would have placed this one higher! Congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/15/2012 12:51:00 PM

congrats Debra on an exciting win for this lottery Limerick luv.. good one..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/13/2012 4:14:00 PM

DEBRA SQUYRES!!!! (This means I am YELLING!)...how did I miss this one???...wow. I love this as a formidable winning write for the contest. It is fabulous!! The title alone wrapped around the tire of a FORD..Fun stuff here, gal! Love, GWendolen

Janet Vick

Date: 1/12/2012 6:13:00 AM

Sure hope it wasn't the winning ticket! Cute limerick. Take care. Janet

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 1/11/2012 5:31:00 PM

So cute Debra-I think Susan will love it!

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 1/11/2012 5:12:00 PM

A humourous and witty read! Wow! You are an awesome poet and have the ability to write on so many different formats! Congratulations Debra and million thx for your comments on mine!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/11/2012 10:26:00 AM

oh my... what if you won?.. a greeeat tickler; love it, debra.. winning's best!..:) huggs!