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Rollercoaster

Ride On a Turbulent Rollercoaster Plummet up and down Pulled by a force driving On track inconsistently Trust always wavers in the wind Hold on because it is not easy On a ride, not knowing what to expect Heidi Sands 10/31/17

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Joseph May

Date: 11/1/2017 3:47:00 PM

Emotions can take us on those rides...Nicely penned Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/1/2017 3:52:00 PM

Yes, that is the truth. Thank you. :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/1/2017 8:39:00 AM

A perfect description of life and living, Heidi. We need to always keep the trust. xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/1/2017 9:19:00 AM

Hi Mike. Yes, we do and it is not always easy to keep the trust. Thank you for your kind comment. Happy Wednesday :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/1/2017 5:52:00 AM

I hate it when my life goes through a roller-coaster ride! The ups and downs can be extreme, we all like the ups so high, but at times those highs can plummet into lows going down, and the force and speed can be debilitating! I loved reading your delightfully expressed poem this morning! What a perfect Etheree! Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/1/2017 9:18:00 AM

Thank you Russell. You are right. I don't like the rollercoaster feeling. I appreciate your kind feedback :) Have a nice day!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/31/2017 7:58:00 PM

Roller coaster ride, a fitting metaphor--well written!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/31/2017 8:17:00 PM

Thank you Vijay :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/31/2017 7:25:00 PM

life definitely is a rollercoaster of emotional highs and lows and we never know what is around the next corner:-( hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/31/2017 7:30:00 PM

So true Jan. We certainly do not know what is around the next corner, day to day. Thank you for your visit. I hope all is well :)