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Rollercoaster

Ride
On a
Turbulent
Rollercoaster
Plummet up and down
Pulled by a force driving
On track inconsistently
Trust always wavers in the wind
Hold on because it is not easy
On a ride, not knowing what to expect

Heidi Sands

10/31/17

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Joseph May

November 1, 2017 at 3:47 PM

Emotions can take us on those rides...Nicely penned Heidi..

Heidi Sands

November 1, 2017 at 3:52 PM

Yes, that is the truth. Thank you. :)

Mike Gentile

November 1, 2017 at 8:39 AM

A perfect description of life and living, Heidi. We need to always keep the trust. xxoo

Heidi Sands

November 1, 2017 at 9:19 AM

Hi Mike. Yes, we do and it is not always easy to keep the trust. Thank you for your kind comment. Happy Wednesday :)

Russell Sivey

November 1, 2017 at 5:52 AM

I hate it when my life goes through a roller-coaster ride! The ups and downs can be extreme, we all like the ups so high, but at times those highs can plummet into lows going down, and the force and speed can be debilitating! I loved reading your delightfully expressed poem this morning! What a perfect Etheree! Great Work!!

Heidi Sands

November 1, 2017 at 9:18 AM

Thank you Russell. You are right. I don't like the rollercoaster feeling. I appreciate your kind feedback :) Have a nice day!