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(Warning: Bawdy Humor)

A randy, young couple out by the bay decided to have a roll in the hay. She pondered, in the moonlight, "Aren't the stars pretty tonight?", and he chuckled "I'm in no place to say!"

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Date: 8/4/2025 4:14:00 PM
yep, subtle but humorous. enjoyed, Sara
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Jim Healey
Date: 8/4/2025 4:19:00 PM
You got the joke! Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 8/4/2025 10:58:00 AM
Okay..This left me wondering about his point of view. Sara K
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Jim Healey
Date: 8/4/2025 11:00:00 AM
Subtle, isn’t it? Heehee!

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