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(Warning: Bawdy Humor)

Roll in the Hay

A randy, young couple out by the bay
decided to have a roll in the hay.
She pondered, in the moonlight,
"Aren't the stars pretty tonight?",
and he chuckled "I'm in no place to say!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 8/19/2025 6:08:00 PM
Okay, this one generated a hearty LOL the other night, and now as well. I love to LOL, do so as often and frequently as any given day allows. Very clever mind you have. Poetry hugs ... CayCay (5)??
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Jim Healey
Date: 8/19/2025 8:00:00 PM
CayCay, if I can make you LOL then I have achieved my purpose in writing this limerick! Thanks for your kind words. Jim
Date: 8/6/2025 7:03:00 AM
Haha! Classic cheeky timing — that last line lands perfectly. Love the blend of romance, moonlight, and mischief. Well done, Jim!
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Jim Healey
Date: 8/6/2025 7:06:00 AM
Thank you, Rowena. So glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 8/4/2025 4:14:00 PM
yep, subtle but humorous. enjoyed, Sara
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Jim Healey
Date: 8/4/2025 4:19:00 PM
You got the joke! Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 8/4/2025 10:58:00 AM
Okay..This left me wondering about his point of view. Sara K
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Jim Healey
Date: 8/4/2025 11:00:00 AM
Subtle, isn’t it? Heehee!
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