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When the forests are felled
By our swallowed words
Hungry ears will burn~

For an owl to say   who




8/29/2019

Silence Poetry Contest
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Shaw Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 7:11 PM
Does an owl ever tell, I wonder . . . : )
Shaw Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 7:27 PM
: /
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 8:08 PM
Nah. They eat rats for breakfast.
Chiri Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 10:53 AM
Maureen congrats on a top win! Happy new year my friend!;)
Ibeh Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:07 PM
Wow, this succinct write packs quite a wallop!. Congrats on your fine win, Maureen:-)
Makama Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 10:24 AM
This is a masterpiece. Your soul is palpable here, a great dish of lines my wonderful friend.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 12:08 PM
Thank you so kindly my friend! I am really close to this one. Poetry hugs, xomo!
Faulkner Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 4:06 PM
Few words can carry maximum impact - many congratulations, Maureen!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 7:37 AM
Thank you Michelle! (some still prefer more words -lol) Hugs! xomo
Sands Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 7:38 AM
This is great. Congratulations Maureen :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 8:33 AM
Thank you Heidi! Hugs, xomo
One Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 3:19 PM
Congrats on your placement in the contest..
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 9:41 PM
Thank you my friend, I enjoyed writing it! xomo
Lamoureux Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 8:46 AM
The distilling/whittling process leaves us with the essence of your thoughts.
Michael Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 4:45 AM
I like that, "WHO" Somebody better tell that owl..." A hungry mouth's going to eat you"
Ashford Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 10:03 AM
Clever and fun write Maureen. Enjoyed!
Faulkner Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 5:22 PM
Silence sometimes speaks the loudest, stirring and provocative, all the best in the contest!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 7:39 AM
It does <3 Thank you Michelle, xomo!
Babcock Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 2:32 PM
You say so much with these few words. Well said. love phyl
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 7:37 AM
Thank you Phyl! (I try ;) xomo!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 10:59 AM
Saying so much with such few words is the sign of a true poet. I tend to be a bit on the verbose side, I can learn a lot from you. Hugs Rick.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 7:36 AM
Thank you so much Rick. I do get poked for not writing longer pieces, I try, then I whittle, and I whittle... ;), Hugs back! xomo
Connelly Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 9:23 AM
Every line in this poem is a poem in itself Maureen. Scary beauty. Thanks Maureen.
Connelly Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 9:13 AM
And you know me, I'm vegetarian; but length isn't everything. It truly is how you use your words. (This is in no way connected to penis size). In any written or spoken form of words "less truly us more"; so I best stop commenting because I'm started to feel emasculated lol.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 9:47 AM
Thank you Jeff. I hope it's potent enough for the sponsor, he tends to prefer longer, meatier pieces, but me, I'm into cold cuts ;), xomo!
Green Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 7:32 AM
Deeply effective in a few short lines. Beautifully done my friend. Best of luck in the contest
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 7:46 AM
Thank you Chris :))) xomo!
Foster Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 11:03 PM
I love this. It should go on a shirt and be sold at the forest shop in all parks. all funds to go to save the owls... Love it. ... hoot hoot to yoot... Ann
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 7:46 AM
Tee hee ;D, Thank you Ann!!! Hoot hoot to yout too, xomo!
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