Roll

it was his wish 
to rush out of heaven as the 
August rain. 

Falling in a rolling style 
An act of Fun. 

So my friend wish to roll 
From up 
Landing in blue of seas
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 4, 2009 at 12:53 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. Much for the reader to think about. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Have a great weekend! Karen
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July 4, 2009 at 11:59 AM
Sounds like a mistake my soul once made,,,,,,,,,,,,the first verse,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, excellent, Moses
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July 4, 2009 at 10:24 AM
Says so much, but leaves alot to the imagination. Love it!
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