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it was his wish to rush out of heaven as the August rain. Falling in a rolling style An act of Fun. So my friend wish to roll From up Landing in blue of seas

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/4/2009 12:53:00 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. Much for the reader to think about. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Have a great weekend! Karen
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Date: 7/4/2009 11:59:00 AM
Sounds like a mistake my soul once made,,,,,,,,,,,,the first verse,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, excellent, Moses
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Date: 7/4/2009 10:24:00 AM
Says so much, but leaves alot to the imagination. Love it!
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