Rogue Hushes

Day-after-day the widow
"listens out for the ordinary" 
and hears only susurrant voices
until deafness overcomes her

©Kathryn McLoughlin Collins
April 21, 2012

Inspired by Jan Oskar Hansen's "To Be Alone"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Austin Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 1:05 PM
Loneliness gets to the eyes too. Like this one because I can relate. Congrats on the selection. Love, old daver
O'Leary Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 2:03 AM
Sometimes the lonliness inside is vaster than the infinite aloneness outside... Terry (good poem)
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June 11, 2012 at 8:48 AM
I love the word 'sussssssurant.' An exquisite piece with the perfect title!! Love, Keith
Grisetti Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 9:52 AM
A very 'sound' poem, a sense not often encountered. Well done.
Wesley Avatar
April 26, 2012 at 5:42 PM
I went and looked up susurrant and now have aq new word :) A wonderful way to describe a way to block out things one doesn't wanat to hear.
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April 21, 2012 at 8:42 AM
Here's an example of how a little poem can deliver a big whallop. Susurrant... it doesn't want to leave my tongue... it lingers in my mouth and mind. Loved this, honey. How are YOU? Hope all is well. I want to write, but the kitchen calls. My sink in piled, a stew needs to be made and I feel like there are spurs being dug into my back... cheers and thanks for all your warmth and encouragement. You so make me smile. Cyndi
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April 21, 2012 at 8:10 AM
lovely kathy you express perfectly what i need much longer to come around and say
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