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rogue cloud highjacking the sun AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on September 4, 2019

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Date: 9/5/2019 10:52:00 PM

See what Sandra and Gershon said? I have nothing this great to say, so re-read their comments and know that I agree with both of them.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/6/2019 8:49:00 AM

LOL thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.

Date: 9/5/2019 9:38:00 AM

great visual, now we need to push that cloud along so we can see the day shine like your words :) nicely penned!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/5/2019 12:00:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Sandra.

Date: 9/5/2019 2:59:00 AM

Great phrase (rogue cloud), great scenario (hijacking the sun), great snapshot --- great haiku! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/5/2019 8:45:00 AM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Gershon.