Rock-Solid Float

Written by Gail DeBole on January 5, 2013
Updated on April 7, 2017

With you on the Ground…

And I floating…

Every once in a while

A breeze lifts me

The clouds hide me

The sun warms me

And you tug on my

String and I join you 

On the ground

Ever so briefly

Until there is a reason to float

Even for a few minutes


Do not let go

Of my string

My arms kite-spread

Thinking I like this

There would be nothing

But a floaty feeling

Nothing to keep me here

If you weren’t there to 

tug me down


A raindrop splashes on my cheek

You tug me away 

Before the 

Downpour hits.
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Makama Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 9:59 AM
I had a fantastic read. I will really love to read more of your work....
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June 22, 2014 at 6:52 AM
- A sense of security and a happy moment .... Lovely poem, Gail - Thanks for the nice visit to some of my poems. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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