Rock Walls Jagged Edges

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Rock walls jagged edges
Beauty protection question
Where do all roads lead

Imagine Lennon
Performing on Mosaic
Central park design

Poet's deep deep thoughts
Dreamer living for moment
Moments_yesterday

Contest:"Your Thoughts" contest
Sponsor:Michael J. Falotico
Written by:Sara Kendrick
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 5/23/2011 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's Your Thoughts contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/22/2011 7:47:00 PM
Cool how you related it to one of his fave singers. Very nice, Sara. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/22/2011 6:19:00 PM
Congrats on your awesome win Sara!
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Date: 5/22/2011 2:40:00 PM
I knew Michael would enjoy this one. Congrats on your nice creative take on this contest. I can imagine Lennon as you mentioned. Awesome. gwendolen
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Date: 5/22/2011 12:18:00 PM
This was one of my favorite entries for Michael's contest, Sara. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/22/2011 9:31:00 AM
loved this one you are such a gifted poet, loved the way this one flowed right along. thank you for commenting on Sweet Child.
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:55:00 AM
Congrats Sara on your big win in the contest....
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:16:00 AM
Congrats Sara on your super win in Michael's contest with this brilliant write my friend.. a fantastic picture u painted with your words.. enjoy your win my friend..luv..
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of michael, Sara
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Date: 5/22/2011 7:12:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Sara : )
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Date: 5/22/2011 6:58:00 AM
congrats on your win. with this fine Piece. cory
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Date: 5/9/2011 3:49:00 PM
thankxx Sara for your encouraging compliments .. I don't know why people choose to hate or judge those they do not know .. but we pray for them to be enlightened...hope u are feeling fine today luv..
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Date: 5/8/2011 10:34:00 PM
very nicely done. Everyone is doing these so effortlessly and I simply cannot do one!! Hope you had a great mother's day. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 5/8/2011 6:55:00 PM
reads like real time in your mind, Sara. I like it, Well done in my estimation. Wish you the best of luck in the contest. Thank you so much for your comments.
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Date: 5/8/2011 5:15:00 PM
Wow, this is really excellent in every way. Love the way you got "Lennon's Imagine" in there. Flows beautifully. Surely this will rank high in the contest, Sara. (And Princess will learn in time to be more accepting of your husband. It may be a little envy at play.) So glad you had a great Mothers Day! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/8/2011 5:01:00 PM
this is very good. I have enjoyed your write. cory
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Date: 5/8/2011 4:41:00 PM
Awesome entry, Sara. Enjoyed. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your comments on my recent postings. Happy Mothers Day. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/8/2011 6:28:00 AM
This as an excellent write Sara. Wonderful approach to do the contest.Best wishes--kash
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Date: 5/7/2011 9:54:00 PM
Cleverly penned Sara ..most creative write luv. Happy Mother's Day ..to u ...
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Date: 5/7/2011 6:13:00 PM
Good interpretation of the image Sara. Good luck in Michael's contest....:)
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Date: 5/7/2011 5:56:00 PM
Nice Sara, one tough thought... good luck in Michael's contest...p.d.
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