Rock Walls Jagged Edges

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Rock walls jagged edges
Beauty protection question
Where do all roads lead

Imagine Lennon
Performing on Mosaic
Central park design

Poet's deep deep thoughts
Dreamer living for moment
Moments_yesterday

Contest:"Your Thoughts" contest
Sponsor:Michael J. Falotico
Written by:Sara Kendrick
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 7:21 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's Your Thoughts contest Sara. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 7:47 PM
Cool how you related it to one of his fave singers. Very nice, Sara. Congratulations.
Hunt Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 6:19 PM
Congrats on your awesome win Sara!
Song Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 2:40 PM
I knew Michael would enjoy this one. Congrats on your nice creative take on this contest. I can imagine Lennon as you mentioned. Awesome. gwendolen
Devonshire Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 12:18 PM
This was one of my favorite entries for Michael's contest, Sara. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Foulk Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 9:31 AM
loved this one you are such a gifted poet, loved the way this one flowed right along. thank you for commenting on Sweet Child.
Poet Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 8:55 AM
Congrats Sara on your big win in the contest....
Sweetheart Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 8:16 AM
Congrats Sara on your super win in Michael's contest with this brilliant write my friend.. a fantastic picture u painted with your words.. enjoy your win my friend..luv..
Mehta Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 8:05 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of michael, Sara
Horne Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 7:12 AM
Many congrats on your win, Sara : )
Long Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 6:58 AM
congrats on your win. with this fine Piece. cory
Sweetheart Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 3:49 PM
thankxx Sara for your encouraging compliments .. I don't know why people choose to hate or judge those they do not know .. but we pray for them to be enlightened...hope u are feeling fine today luv..
Dietrich Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 10:34 PM
very nicely done. Everyone is doing these so effortlessly and I simply cannot do one!! Hope you had a great mother's day. LUv, Andrea
Dufresne Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 6:55 PM
reads like real time in your mind, Sara. I like it, Well done in my estimation. Wish you the best of luck in the contest. Thank you so much for your comments.
Devonshire Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 5:15 PM
Wow, this is really excellent in every way. Love the way you got "Lennon's Imagine" in there. Flows beautifully. Surely this will rank high in the contest, Sara. (And Princess will learn in time to be more accepting of your husband. It may be a little envy at play.) So glad you had a great Mothers Day! Love, Carolyn
Long Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 5:01 PM
this is very good. I have enjoyed your write. cory
Taylor Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 4:41 PM
Awesome entry, Sara. Enjoyed. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your comments on my recent postings. Happy Mothers Day. xxxRalph
Poet Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 6:28 AM
This as an excellent write Sara. Wonderful approach to do the contest.Best wishes--kash
Sweetheart Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 9:54 PM
Cleverly penned Sara ..most creative write luv. Happy Mother's Day ..to u ...
Fraser Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 6:13 PM
Good interpretation of the image Sara. Good luck in Michael's contest....:)
A   Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 5:56 PM
Nice Sara, one tough thought... good luck in Michael's contest...p.d.
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