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Rock Star

  Determined to succeed
    He'd play that guitar 'til his fingers'd bleed

  Once, Kyle aspired to be a rock star
    ~ 'til sped to the manicurist in an ambulance car

Copyright © Gershon Wolf | Year Posted 2023

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December 12, 2023 at 3:47 PM

Ewww thats A bit extreme! Clever fun write BB….Debx

December 12, 2023 at 1:20 PM

Such a twist! I think he “nail”ed it!

Paula Goldsmith

December 12, 2023 at 6:48 AM

I enjoyed your fun/cute write. Poor guy... Guess he loves his music. Have a great day writing away.............

Hilda Greenhough

December 12, 2023 at 2:06 AM

How sad for Kyle. Music isn't for everyone. I liked the rhyme and picturesque description.

December 12, 2023 at 1:19 AM

Ooohoo! That's what I call just a tad obsessive. Too cute Gershon. This one made me smile. God Bless and Merry Christmas, JB

December 12, 2023 at 12:48 AM

Wow that's some dedication playing guitar till fingers bleed! Tragic couplet!

December 11, 2023 at 9:57 PM

Nasty twist in these couplets, gw. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. BB

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