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Rock Formations In the Desert

The monks were frozen in place
and in time, in a barren field
The countryside offered them nothing

They seemed desolate and lonely
Were they remnants of families?
They are clustered like that

Or were they monks surprised by lava
The gorgeous blue of the sky
gave us no clue; we approached cautiously

Unsure if we were going to encounter
Something alive or something long dead.
Would they be granite or more like petrified forest?

There is a flowing feeling to them
Perhaps they are made from gunny sacks or linen.
It is a curiosity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 5/13/2021 2:26:00 PM
Petrified?
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/13/2021 6:31:00 PM
That is the word I wanted but never thought of. GRRRRR
Date: 5/13/2021 8:40:00 AM
Thanks Caren for comment about my poem. James watkin
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/13/2021 6:31:00 PM
You are ever so welcome James
Date: 5/13/2021 5:34:00 AM
It's a very interesting poem.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/13/2021 6:31:00 PM
Thank you kindly Christuraj
Date: 5/12/2021 6:36:00 PM
this is so interesting. thanks for sharing. Have a good night.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/13/2021 3:00:00 AM
Thank you Virginia

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