Nette Onclaud Poet Blank verse

Robins In Springtime

When velvet robins dive at night,

to herald new spring’s lit premiere

a chorus drools upon the lake;

enchanting waves to bounce along

and near a harbor, jasmines twirl

from lively notes of birds' refrain...

music pealing    for spring's debut!




Jesse Rowe's One Stanza Contest

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Kim Merryman July 23, 2016 at 8:53 PM Beautiful imagery, Nette! Congrats on your placement! Blessings!

Paul Callus July 20, 2016 at 4:17 PM Hi Nette! I'm back to reread this beautiful winning stanza! Congratulations. Hugs // paul

Bl Devnath July 20, 2016 at 1:14 PM Congrats on your beautiful win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Sunita U.D Palawon July 20, 2016 at 11:12 AM Enchanting really...the lines composed. Congrats on your placing. Sunita :)

Charlie Smith July 20, 2016 at 6:47 AM Beautiful, congratulations Nette...

Jesse Day July 19, 2016 at 10:13 PM Nicely composed verse. Congratulations for your impressive 4th place win in the One Staza One-Only contest! Jesse

Beautiful Scars July 19, 2016 at 3:49 PM Nette, oh so perfect with lovely imagery lady..well written lovely Nette... congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich July 17, 2016 at 5:10 PM So beautiful. I'm using cell phone. This is so dreadful. Wish I were home!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2016 at 3:28 PM - A beautiful melody in your magnificent poem, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Quigley July 16, 2016 at 6:59 AM Lovely write with a great rhythm!

Rhoma Em July 15, 2016 at 8:01 PM Beguiled! You caught a lush moment of a season's arrival with exquisite melody. When robins chirp, it's truly spring! Rhoma Em July 15, 2016 at 8:02 PM And a 7!

Gabby Sabre July 15, 2016 at 1:59 PM This form poetry is remarkably captivating with a musical flow from your gifted hand!

Paul Callus July 15, 2016 at 1:45 PM This is a beautiful quatern, Nette; your velvet robins and their song come to life in these words of yours. ~ I entered a poem for this contest, and now I'm wondering whether I understood right the rule about 1 stanza. Perhaps it's best we both check the rules again! Hugs // paul