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Robins Dart

As the Robins dart across the grass Ignoring the clouds of gray Cold breeze and cold dry air Every so often they bob their heads Eating a bug or seed something to me unseen The Redbuds that in the wild do grow Begin to show their true colors Along the roads as about our lives we go Awaking soon to different shades of green They'll fill the artist's canvas of woods Each tree shows its beautiful or knarled Structure that's not now hidden by leaf or flower Some being stately and others Seem to be dower some look as Though being crownded or shaped By ice storm or children playing on tender limbs Soon the full canvas will be painted With all the colors of spring bringing To mind love and romance of the springtime A time of sunny days with just enough warmth Color, aroma, and scent of spring flowers To fill all hearts with those desires..amore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/8/2010 6:42:00 PM
Lovely transition of nature transforming as only nature may. You have succeeded in taking the reader in tow and bringing them into your world. Something I believe is a tough task. Beautifully constructed and presented.
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Date: 3/7/2010 8:19:00 AM
Another vista painted by your words Sara, just delightful >> James
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Date: 3/4/2010 12:31:00 PM
enjoyed reading today
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Date: 3/4/2010 3:50:00 AM
I am so happy your poetry is among the poetry I am reading this morning Sara. I wish you a day full of love and inspiration and nice warm weather. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/4/2010 1:06:00 AM
Your title captures the movenent moments Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 3/3/2010 6:16:00 PM
The robins have shown up here too Sara. This is a good sign that warm weather is soon to come. They are a welcome sight to me, I'm certainly ready. I received some onions that I had ordered in the mail today. I will get them in the ground soon, it it doesn't rain. I like to plant onions while it is still cold, and let them take root, and be ready when it warms up. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/3/2010 2:16:00 PM
Hope spring happens soon this winter weather is the pits. Good write Sara.
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Date: 3/3/2010 12:26:00 PM
Hi, Sara. I can hardly wait for spring,those robins "bobbing their heads,' eating the "unseen." Charming write. BIG LOVE, daver
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Date: 3/3/2010 12:06:00 PM
Am so patiently waiting for the day u describe so perfectly in this poem.. cannot wait to see and hear the birds again.. they must be as confused by this weather as we are here on the East Coast.. a half rain half snow half ice day... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/3/2010 10:18:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem. Very creative skills on any poem I have read . Written by yourself..I want to thank you for your reply on''' fear.''' Well thank you for all your comments. I really do enjoy reading your many diffrent poems....IRMA
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