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Robin of the Hoodie

Robin of the Hoodie

Alas, resides in Sherwood Forest,
one Robin of the Hoodie.  He’s lost
amid the greenery, weeping
as sunset nears for underneath
the Hood he hides his deep
and lonely fears.  The Hoodie
no protection here amid the
bug filled darkness, nor can
it quell the eerie sounds of
hoodless creature calls,
his secret handshake useless
among the clawed and taloned.
He drifts to sleep with visions
of “Air Jordans” that can fly,
carry him to safety, the
streetlit yellow streaks
of alleyways and thoroughfares
the Hoodie creatures know.
Summoning his courage
he storms the distant hut
enters into murky stink,
old wooden planks,
and curses those who left him
on his own, abandoned him
to Hoodie misery.
Fools who took 
a city kid out camping,
fed him beans and franks
and stories until
“HE HAD TO GO”.

2/16/2016

submitted to – A twisted poem about Robin Hood – Poetry Contest
sponsor – C. T.

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Date: 2/19/2016 10:16:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this amazing poem John.
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Date: 2/19/2016 1:17:00 PM
John, great write !:) Congratulations on your Robin Hood twisted win!!!
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Date: 2/19/2016 12:39:00 PM
Hi John, Congratulations on your Robin Hood twisted win. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/19/2016 12:07:00 PM
many congrats on your win John:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:15:00 PM
Hey, Jan, my response to CT wound up jumping, Appreciated your support.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:07:00 PM
Thanks CT
Date: 2/19/2016 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations. CT
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:15:00 PM
Thanks CT
Date: 2/17/2016 3:51:00 PM
I like the modern slant. Like me, you drew from a different era!!
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:06:00 PM
Well Andrea, when the raccoons are eating the hot dogs you didn't.......and ya gotta go......
Date: 2/17/2016 2:53:00 PM
I first I thought it was a homeless teen, but you certainly caught me off guard with this hilarious ending. Sure to top the winners list, John. Elaine
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:05:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by to read and comment Elaine.
Date: 2/16/2016 2:55:00 PM
Sure is a unique take on the theme John! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:04:00 PM
Well Jan, the muse remembers many things that I'd rather forget.
Date: 2/16/2016 9:41:00 AM
What a great take on the subject, John. Good luck in the contest.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:03:00 PM
Thanks for stopping to read and comment Steve.

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