Roar

Just because she roars Doesn't mean she doesn't feel You don't know her ordeal Stop and think before you squeall You don't know what she has to conceal You couldn't possibly know how she feels She hasn't made any deals She tries to be real And Before you appeal You should love her enough to let her heal

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/2/2019 8:28:00 PM

I feel these words so deeply. One should never judge a book by its cover- nor should anyone try to know someone, until they truly know them. I wish to save this in my favorites. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/1/2019 7:37:00 PM

A splendid Monorhyme Anne-Lise! It is so true. We are so fast to judge before knowing the reasons for actions. Congratulations on having this wonderful poem honored for POTD! Happy New year! xxoo ; )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2019 8:57:00 AM

- Dear Connie, this is not my poem :)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/1/2019 1:55:00 AM

Expressive and wise words Anne-Lise. We hardly ever know what a person is experiencing, and yet people are quick to surmise, to judge. Congrats on POTD. Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/1/2019 7:33:00 AM

- Paul, this is not my poem :) - "Sunshine Shine" ... should find another name ... my "Sunshine Smile" is used from 2011 ... :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf

Date: 12/31/2018 10:38:00 PM

A good choice for POTD. Congrats on an awesome write

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/31/2018 9:15:00 PM

Indeed! Your empathetic voice also roars with lovely compassion in your beautiful and powerful poem, Sunshine. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved POTD honors. Warmest wishes for a happy new year.. ~Susan

Eve Roper

Date: 12/31/2018 7:43:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD, SS, may she always Roar. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*

Wren Rushing

Date: 12/31/2018 12:25:00 PM

Welcome to the soup! And congratulations on POTD! Have a wonderful New Years, Sunshine Shine!

Sunshine Shine

Date: 12/31/2018 9:25:00 AM

Eek! This is exciting I'm happy you all enjoyed this write Thank you all for your very kind words very much appreciate Hope everyone has a great new year! Much Love Sunshine

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/31/2018 9:24:00 AM

It pleases me so much to see your work honored Anne-Lise, congratulations...

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/31/2018 1:16:00 PM

Whoops, sorry Sunshine Shine, congratulations to you...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/31/2018 1:10:00 PM

- It's not my poem, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/31/2018 8:20:00 AM

Wonderful, perfect poem <3 Congratulations on POTD! xomo

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/31/2018 8:12:00 AM

We hear your (((ROAR))) S.S...Congrats!!! on POTD!!...Welcome to the Soup and Happy New Year!...love & light...^WW^

Vladislav Raven

Date: 12/31/2018 7:48:00 AM

Hi Sunshine, congratulations on this excellent write being honoured as Poem Of The Day. A much deserved accolade. Have a wonderful start to your New Year....Mike

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/31/2018 7:05:00 AM

Hi Sunshine Smile, Great message! Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Welcome to the soup Sunshine:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/1/2019 7:35:00 AM

- "Sunshine Smile" ... hi, Alexis :)))

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/31/2018 1:24:00 PM

I made a mistake and it's fixed now:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/31/2018 1:11:00 PM

- It's not my poem, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/31/2018 6:56:00 AM

Congrats on POTD Anne-Lise..so well written!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/31/2018 1:12:00 PM

- It's not my poem, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/31/2018 6:15:00 AM

Congratulations for POTD! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/31/2018 6:05:00 AM

Congrats on Poem of the Day! Yes, you have to look deeply into what is causing one to roar. Happy New Year, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/31/2018 1:13:00 PM

- It's not my poem, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/31/2018 5:22:00 AM

Congratulations on this empathetic poem being honored as POTD... So true, oft we fail to see any inkling of the pain another person is or has once endured and how it has affected that person. A fav..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/31/2018 3:47:00 AM

Back with congratulations on POTD. Welcome to 'soup' Tom

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 12/31/2018 1:18:00 AM

Your poem is "roaring"! Congratulations on your POTD Sunshine! Rejoice in the honour of recognition.. Welcome to Poetry Soup.. Happy New Year and blessings.

Aqua Marine

Date: 12/30/2018 3:32:00 PM

It's so easy to be afraid of a "Roar," not understanding it might be made by someone in pain... "she tries to be real" shows understanding, and the whole poem is one of empathy. Well done, and welcome to Poetry Soup!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/30/2018 1:06:00 PM

"Just because she roars" - it sounds like you realize that roaring is a sign that she needs to heal. Very smartly done. Welcome to Poetry Soup.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/30/2018 12:48:00 PM

It's often said we don't know what goes on in peoples lives, so true. Hope you have a wonderful new year. Tom.

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/30/2018 9:45:00 AM

Oh I love this too! A favorite. So well written! :)