Sunshine Shine Poet Rhyme

Roar

Just because she roars
Doesn't mean she doesn't feel 
You don't know her ordeal
Stop and think before you squeall
You don't know what she has to conceal 
You couldn't possibly know how she feels

She hasn't made any deals
She tries to be real
And Before you appeal 
You should love her enough to let her heal

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Brandy Nicole January 2, 2019 at 8:28 PM I feel these words so deeply. One should never judge a book by its cover- nor should anyone try to know someone, until they truly know them. I wish to save this in my favorites. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy

Connie Marcum Wong January 1, 2019 at 7:37 PM A splendid Monorhyme Anne-Lise! It is so true. We are so fast to judge before knowing the reasons for actions. Congratulations on having this wonderful poem honored for POTD! Happy New year! xxoo ; ) Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2019 at 8:57 AM - Dear Connie, this is not my poem :)

Paul Callus January 1, 2019 at 1:55 AM Expressive and wise words Anne-Lise. We hardly ever know what a person is experiencing, and yet people are quick to surmise, to judge. Congrats on POTD. Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2019 at 7:33 AM - Paul, this is not my poem :) - "Sunshine Shine" ... should find another name ... my "Sunshine Smile" is used from 2011 ... :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf December 31, 2018 at 10:38 PM A good choice for POTD. Congrats on an awesome write

Susan Ashley December 31, 2018 at 9:15 PM Indeed! Your empathetic voice also roars with lovely compassion in your beautiful and powerful poem, Sunshine. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved POTD honors. Warmest wishes for a happy new year.. ~Susan

Eve Roper December 31, 2018 at 7:43 PM Congratulations on POTD, SS, may she always Roar. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*

Wren Rushing December 31, 2018 at 12:25 PM Welcome to the soup! And congratulations on POTD! Have a wonderful New Years, Sunshine Shine!

Sunshine Shine December 31, 2018 at 9:25 AM Eek! This is exciting I'm happy you all enjoyed this write Thank you all for your very kind words very much appreciate Hope everyone has a great new year! Much Love Sunshine

Charlie Smith December 31, 2018 at 9:24 AM It pleases me so much to see your work honored Anne-Lise, congratulations... Charlie Smith December 31, 2018 at 1:16 PM Whoops, sorry Sunshine Shine, congratulations to you... Anne-Lise Andresen December 31, 2018 at 1:10 PM - It's not my poem, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 31, 2018 at 8:20 AM Wonderful, perfect poem <3 Congratulations on POTD! xomo

Winged Warrior December 31, 2018 at 8:12 AM We hear your (((ROAR))) S.S...Congrats!!! on POTD!!...Welcome to the Soup and Happy New Year!...love & light...^WW^

Vladislav Raven December 31, 2018 at 7:48 AM Hi Sunshine, congratulations on this excellent write being honoured as Poem Of The Day. A much deserved accolade. Have a wonderful start to your New Year....Mike

Alexis Y. December 31, 2018 at 7:05 AM Hi Sunshine Smile, Great message! Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Welcome to the soup Sunshine:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2019 at 7:35 AM - "Sunshine Smile" ... hi, Alexis :))) Alexis Y. December 31, 2018 at 1:24 PM I made a mistake and it's fixed now:-) Anne-Lise Andresen December 31, 2018 at 1:11 PM - It's not my poem, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit December 31, 2018 at 6:56 AM Congrats on POTD Anne-Lise..so well written! Anne-Lise Andresen December 31, 2018 at 1:12 PM - It's not my poem, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands December 31, 2018 at 6:15 AM Congratulations for POTD! :)

Kim Rodrigues December 31, 2018 at 6:05 AM Congrats on Poem of the Day! Yes, you have to look deeply into what is causing one to roar. Happy New Year, Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen December 31, 2018 at 1:13 PM - It's not my poem, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley December 31, 2018 at 5:22 AM Congratulations on this empathetic poem being honored as POTD... So true, oft we fail to see any inkling of the pain another person is or has once endured and how it has affected that person. A fav..

Tom Cunningham December 31, 2018 at 3:47 AM Back with congratulations on POTD. Welcome to 'soup' Tom

Besma Riabi Dziri December 31, 2018 at 1:18 AM Your poem is "roaring"! Congratulations on your POTD Sunshine! Rejoice in the honour of recognition.. Welcome to Poetry Soup.. Happy New Year and blessings.

Aqua Marine December 30, 2018 at 3:32 PM It's so easy to be afraid of a "Roar," not understanding it might be made by someone in pain... "she tries to be real" shows understanding, and the whole poem is one of empathy. Well done, and welcome to Poetry Soup!

Caren Krutsinger December 30, 2018 at 1:06 PM "Just because she roars" - it sounds like you realize that roaring is a sign that she needs to heal. Very smartly done. Welcome to Poetry Soup.

Tom Cunningham December 30, 2018 at 12:48 PM It's often said we don't know what goes on in peoples lives, so true. Hope you have a wonderful new year. Tom.

Heidi Sands December 30, 2018 at 9:45 AM Oh I love this too! A favorite. So well written! :)