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Long herbaceous desert I ride your arid roads perfect for catching up word games, banter erupts gay moments make new paths time gently d r i f t s a w a y

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/10/2025 7:38:00 AM

Great setting! Congrats!

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/10/2025 8:43:00 AM

Ty. Sonoran Desert AI.

Robert Gorelick

Date: 5/8/2025 12:31:00 PM

Lulled into a state of fond whimsy, wishing I were there! bol, Robert

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/9/2025 11:33:00 AM

Lol. you have found something out, working on my metaphors! Ty, Robby !

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/7/2025 5:39:00 PM

Anaya, I've been on that road or some similar ones out west. Really spectacular views and an amazing habitat. Smiles!!

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/9/2025 11:31:00 AM

I loved the sceneries while driving. This was syllable limited, a chance to try metaphors, they say to make new memories of the places once stormy. I take that advice seriously. I haven't convinced my partner yet to return to San Francisco and so he can make new 'good' memories from his past bad ones, and I can enjoy the Fish n Chips on the Wharf! lol.

Paige Hind

Date: 5/7/2025 1:30:00 PM

Beautiful, a bit of wishful thinking... :) sure this will do well <3

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/7/2025 3:29:00 PM

TY, I've taken many trips through the desert my dear, Paige. Word games makes the time pass quickly and breaks the ice!