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Seventh Place

ROADTRIP




                             Long herbaceous desert
                             I ride  your arid roads
                             perfect for catching up 
                             word games, banter erupts
                             gay moments make new paths
                             time gently d r i f t s   a
                                                           w
                                                             a  y
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Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 7:38 AM
Great setting! Congrats!
Anaya Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 8:43 AM
Ty. Sonoran Desert AI.
Gorelick Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 12:31 PM
Lulled into a state of fond whimsy, wishing I were there! bol, Robert
Anaya Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 11:33 AM
Lol. you have found something out, working on my metaphors! Ty, Robby !
Beaufort Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 5:39 PM
Anaya, I've been on that road or some similar ones out west. Really spectacular views and an amazing habitat. Smiles!!
Anaya Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 11:31 AM
I loved the sceneries while driving. This was syllable limited, a chance to try metaphors, they say to make new memories of the places once stormy. I take that advice seriously. I haven't convinced my partner yet to return to San Francisco and so he can make new 'good' memories from his past bad ones, and I can enjoy the Fish n Chips on the Wharf! lol.
Hind Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 1:30 PM
Beautiful, a bit of wishful thinking... :) sure this will do well <3
Anaya Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 3:29 PM
TY, I've taken many trips through the desert my dear, Paige. Word games makes the time pass quickly and breaks the ice!
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