Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Limerick

Road-Side Test

There was once an old boozer named Dale

   Who guzzled copious pints of ale

      Although he tried his best

         He flunked the road-side test

            And was remanded sans bail to jail

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Gershon Wolf December 22, 2024 at 7:48 PM Dale goes to jail! ~ Bucket and Pail, gw

Beryl Edmonds July 3, 2023 at 8:19 PM The old boozer Dale was such a fool - Not adhering to the golden rule - To be staying alive - One must not drink and drive - For drunken dudes Shanks’s pony is cool.……. Belle Robert L. Hinshaw July 6, 2023 at 11:18 AM Belle, I love your poetical reply. You should post this one - I think it would get a good reception by soupers Bob

Panagiota Romios July 3, 2023 at 6:52 PM Perfect, my friend. I say that because you are not a comment collector. Well how do we know who is? Those who read you,drop you like a dead skunk all of a sudden. Don’t know we have feelings? Panagiota

Anne-Lise Andresen July 3, 2023 at 3:27 AM ... got what he deserved ... great, Bob :) - hugs Robert L. Hinshaw July 3, 2023 at 6:27 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise. Great to hear from you and best to you - Bob H

Mystic Rose Rose July 2, 2023 at 6:46 PM drinking and driving never mixed, well done Robert. Robert L. Hinshaw July 3, 2023 at 6:27 AM Thank you, Mystic and what you say is so true. Have a wonderful 4th - Bob

Ilene Bauer July 2, 2023 at 4:51 PM Good one, Bob! I enjoyed… Robert L. Hinshaw July 2, 2023 at 4:51 PM Thanks, Ilene. I like to write lims and hope to come up with more. Happy Fourth - Bob

Michael Tor July 2, 2023 at 2:57 PM Lol Robert I know a few that have followed in his footsteps. Hope you are well my friend. Have to really catch up on your lovely Poetry. God bless you... Robert L. Hinshaw July 2, 2023 at 4:49 PM Thank you, Michael for your kind comments and continued support. Best on you and keep well. Bob H